As Light As a Feather

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Vibrant and bold, wings Lifted on the wind Whispering hope, laughter Sunshine reflecting joy Dancing wistfully, whimsically Coloring the heart in hues Brilliant as the azure sky More beautiful than the smile Twinkling in the kindly eyes Sparkling with wonder, alive Like a song stirred by butterfly kisses Against the petals of a blushing rose Rustling pleasures, breathless As light as a feather Drifting hope across the dawn Simile Poetry Contest Sponsored by Hilo Poet August 3, 2022

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/3/2022 4:28:00 PM

Such an uplifting vibrant rendering Gina. A great entry! Linda

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/3/2022 12:28:00 PM

This poem is really moving, Gina, so well-written and so vibant. I loved the simile. Best wishes in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/3/2022 9:46:00 AM

This poem is really beautiful and uplifting Gina. It should shine bright in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/3/2022 7:44:00 AM

Love your wistful wings! Be blessed, Gina!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/3/2022 6:09:00 AM

I love your beautiful imagery in this verse, Gina, it colors my heart in hues as brilliant as the azure sky. I believe this should do well in the contest. Hugs, John