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As Light As a Feather

Vibrant and bold, wings 
Lifted on the wind
Whispering hope, laughter
Sunshine reflecting joy
Dancing wistfully, whimsically
Coloring the heart in hues
Brilliant as the azure sky
More beautiful than the smile
Twinkling in the kindly eyes
Sparkling with wonder, alive
Like a song stirred by butterfly kisses
Against the petals of a blushing rose
Rustling pleasures, breathless
As light as a feather
	Drifting hope across the dawn






Simile Poetry Contest
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August 3, 2022
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Fowler Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 4:28 PM
Such an uplifting vibrant rendering Gina. A great entry! Linda
Hankins Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 12:28 PM
This poem is really moving, Gina, so well-written and so vibant. I loved the simile. Best wishes in the contest.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 9:46 AM
This poem is really beautiful and uplifting Gina. It should shine bright in the contest. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Love your wistful wings! Be blessed, Gina!
Gondolf Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 6:09 AM
I love your beautiful imagery in this verse, Gina, it colors my heart in hues as brilliant as the azure sky. I believe this should do well in the contest. Hugs, John
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