As It Rains

Today would be the perfect day
To call out of work
And laugh & play
As the bed lays 
against the window pane
I can hear each drop
As we lay
As it rains

Just the two of us
Trying to keep warm
I breathe your kisses into my lungs
And they heal a heart that’s been torn

You make me so happy
After pain attacked me
But each rain drop explodes
As you grab me

Your kisses to my forehead
Bring tears down my face
I have a bleeding heart
That has been saved
As we lay,
As it rains...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 24, 2026 at 7:50 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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April 28, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Domingo. I will be back again to read more. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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April 23, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free and fun.. so check them out..luv..
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April 22, 2011 at 1:29 PM
welcome to poetrysoup. enjoyed this write.
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April 22, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Domingo! Domingo! That is the name of my fiance.. or x- ... I sure enjoyed the passion here... and as me rain and romance what a perfect match... take care ..Linda
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