Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Tanka

As If In a Dream

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..."

                       Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings)



                                 as if in a dream
                    glimpse sapphire waves lapping on
                             sea-shore..giggling girl
                           hold eager extended hand
                              frenzy never forgotten



                                   October 2, 2022
      Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest
                           Sponsor: Constance La France
                   Syllables (5-7-5-7-7) checked by HMS.com

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Bill Baker October 26, 2022 at 4:09 PM Such a playful write for the contest, Mala. Good luck! Bill

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2022 at 9:45 AM Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2022 at 6:39 AM - You have chosen a great quote ... the poem is wonderful, Mala ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury October 5, 2022 at 6:52 AM Dear Anne-Lise, I did not choose the quote, Constance did. I haven't submitted the poem yet. appreciate your inspiring comment, Dear Friend.