As If In a Dream

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings) as if in a dream glimpse sapphire waves lapping on sea-shore..giggling girl hold eager extended hand frenzy never forgotten October 2, 2022 Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Syllables (5-7-5-7-7) checked by HMS.com

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/26/2022 4:09:00 PM

Such a playful write for the contest, Mala. Good luck! Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2022 9:45:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2022 6:39:00 AM

- You have chosen a great quote ... the poem is wonderful, Mala ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/5/2022 6:52:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, I did not choose the quote, Constance did. I haven't submitted the poem yet. appreciate your inspiring comment, Dear Friend.