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This could be the reason not to based poems on dreams. 

As I Went to Sleep

I was innocent as I went to sleep,
But soon I would be in trouble, deep.
My problems would pile up in a heap 
As I went to sleep, to sleep.  

I began to nap, blameless and free, 
Without a trouble in the world,
But, as I lay there snoozing soundly, 
Unfortunate events unfurled.

I witnessed the unlucky ax murder
Of a friend of a friend.
Why was I the only one to see?
Fate, I cannot comprehend.

The living friend asked me who did it.   
So I squealed on who I saw. 
A second murder, then sadly ensued, as he 
Killed her with a hammer claw.  

For that murder, then I too was guilty,
The jury reasoned, wise.
I should be sentenced unsparingly,
They sagely did advise.

In my friend's guilt, I would rightly share,
Though I went to sleep without a care, 
I woke up to the chair, the chair.
I woke up to the electric chair.
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Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 9:28 AM
A great and funny poem. It electrified my imagination. Lol.
Crandall Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Hilda!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Wow! Our first clue - I was innocent as I went to sleep…murder in the eye of the dreamer…a friend of friend gets the a and the friend gets the claw. Love too - As I went to sleep, to sleep…and then the chair…the chair. Great poem, David.
Crandall Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:58 AM
Thanks Kim, I'm glad that you liked it, and that repetition! It seems unfair that everything's fine when you go to bed, and you wake up guilty!
Christian Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:51 AM
ohhh a scary dream nicley written
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