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This could be the reason not to based poems on dreams. 

I was innocent as I went to sleep, But soon I would be in trouble, deep. My problems would pile up in a heap As I went to sleep, to sleep. I began to nap, blameless and free, Without a trouble in the world, But, as I lay there snoozing soundly, Unfortunate events unfurled. I witnessed the unlucky ax murder Of a friend of a friend. Why was I the only one to see? Fate, I cannot comprehend. The living friend asked me who did it. So I squealed on who I saw. A second murder, then sadly ensued, as he Killed her with a hammer claw. For that murder, then I too was guilty, The jury reasoned, wise. I should be sentenced unsparingly, They sagely did advise. In my friend's guilt, I would rightly share, Though I went to sleep without a care, I woke up to the chair, the chair. I woke up to the electric chair.

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Date: 6/25/2024 9:28:00 AM
A great and funny poem. It electrified my imagination. Lol.
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David Crandall
Date: 6/25/2024 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Hilda!
Date: 6/24/2024 11:18:00 AM
Wow! Our first clue - I was innocent as I went to sleep…murder in the eye of the dreamer…a friend of friend gets the a and the friend gets the claw. Love too - As I went to sleep, to sleep…and then the chair…the chair. Great poem, David.
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David Crandall
Date: 6/25/2024 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I'm glad that you liked it, and that repetition! It seems unfair that everything's fine when you go to bed, and you wake up guilty!
Date: 6/24/2024 10:51:00 AM
ohhh a scary dream nicley written
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