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As I Was Walking In the Snow

Up ahead, a snowy trail The lambs and goats do bellow And though I have thirst My lips will stay pursed Because that snow is yellow 2/22/18 As I Was Walking In the Snow For Kevin Shaw

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2018 8:54:00 PM

LOL -- yellow snow! ... What parents have been telling kids not to eat since the beginning of time (or at least, the first snowfall). Congrats!! Best wishes, Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/4/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Gershon !!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2018 3:01:00 PM

Lol I wrote one on yellow snow recently lol:-) congratulations on your win mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/4/2018 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2018 1:07:00 AM

Congratulations Mike. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/3/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Tom!!!

John Lawless

Date: 3/2/2018 11:30:00 PM

Good one Mike...

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/3/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thanks John !!!’

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/2/2018 9:03:00 PM

Lol! Mike, Yuck! Great take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2018 8:08:00 PM

hahaha.. Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 7:13:00 PM

Back with congrats, Mike. Well done. Hope you found yourself a suitable refreshment in the meantime. LOL

Silent One

Date: 2/23/2018 6:59:00 AM

Which song is that Mike?

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/23/2018 7:38:00 AM

I have to look it up but as a kid, I remember something about Suzy Cream cheese and don't you eat no yellow snow, If I can find it, I will revert !!