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As I Was Walking In the Snow

Up ahead, a snowy trail
     The lambs and goats do bellow
And though I have thirst
     My lips will stay pursed
Because that snow is yellow


2/22/18
As I Was Walking In the Snow
For Kevin Shaw

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Gershon Wolf March 3, 2018 at 8:54 PM LOL -- yellow snow! ... What parents have been telling kids not to eat since the beginning of time (or at least, the first snowfall). Congrats!! Best wishes, Gershon Mike Gentile March 4, 2018 at 8:47 AM Thank you Gershon !!

Jan Allison March 3, 2018 at 3:01 PM Lol I wrote one on yellow snow recently lol:-) congratulations on your win mike:-) hugs Jan xx Mike Gentile March 4, 2018 at 8:46 AM Thanks so much, Jan xxoo

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2018 at 1:07 AM Congratulations Mike. Tom Mike Gentile March 3, 2018 at 7:20 AM Thanks Tom!!!

John Lawless March 2, 2018 at 11:30 PM Good one Mike... Mike Gentile March 3, 2018 at 7:21 AM Thanks John !!!’

Alexis Y. March 2, 2018 at 9:03 PM Lol! Mike, Yuck! Great take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Eve Roper March 2, 2018 at 8:08 PM hahaha.. Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier March 2, 2018 at 7:13 PM Back with congrats, Mike. Well done. Hope you found yourself a suitable refreshment in the meantime. LOL

Silent One February 23, 2018 at 6:59 AM Which song is that Mike? Mike Gentile February 23, 2018 at 7:38 AM I have to look it up but as a kid, I remember something about Suzy Cream cheese and don't you eat no yellow snow, If I can find it, I will revert !!

Dale Gregory Cozart February 22, 2018 at 2:54 PM EEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Funny poem though. Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 3:29 PM Thanks Dale !!

Silent One February 22, 2018 at 2:16 PM Ha, would not be a good idea... Good limerick Mike.. Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 3:29 PM Thanks Silent One , do you remember the old Frank Zappa song??

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 1:19 PM - Lemon snow ....... refreshing :) - Well done, Mike :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 3:30 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

Tom Cunningham February 22, 2018 at 12:27 PM Great one Mike, remember eating it as a kid, can't remember what colour it was though ,yuck. Good luck in the contest. Tom Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 12:48 PM Thanks much, Tom !!!

Line Gauthier February 22, 2018 at 11:54 AM Very wise and witty, Mike. Well done. Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thank you Line xxoo

Vijay Pandit February 22, 2018 at 11:35 AM A fund read--yes..stay away from the yellow snow..good imagery, Mike! Mike Gentile February 22, 2018 at 11:49 AM Thanks Vijay!!