Viv Wigley Poet Limerick

As I Was Walking In the Snow

One morning I decided to go
for a walk on the tightly packed snow
but I made a mistake
and stepped out on a lake
now my bits have all shrivelled, you know!

February 19th 2018
For contest 'As I was walking in the snow', sponsor Kevin Shaw

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Eve Roper April 12, 2018 at 11:02 AM Snow and ice is not my thing I always slip and fall... my rump is always sore.. enjoyed reading, Viv... Hugs Eve

Jean Murray February 25, 2018 at 7:13 PM You should have that looked at Tim. Trust me....I'm a nurse.

Paul Callus February 20, 2018 at 9:43 AM Ok...I know,I shouldn't be laughing...could have easily been me, except we don't have lakes in Malta:))Hope you're sitting by a nice, warm heater! Regards // paul Viv Wigley February 20, 2018 at 10:36 AM Thanks, Paul, a fictional tale, but it helped break the ice. Regards, Viv

Jan Allison February 19, 2018 at 12:06 PM Hilarious! Hugs Jan Viv Wigley February 20, 2018 at 10:37 AM Thanks Jan, bits back to.normal. I think. Viv x

John Lawless February 19, 2018 at 6:57 AM relax Viv, they should come back out in the spring.....

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2018 at 1:31 AM - Well done, Viv :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry February 19, 2018 at 12:12 AM Lol! Wasn't expecting the ending. Fun read. Susan Gentry February 19, 2018 at 12:13 AM

Susan Gentry February 19, 2018 at 12:11 AM Lol! Wasn't expecting the ending. Fun read.

Tom Cunningham February 18, 2018 at 11:40 PM Haha, why is it only men suffer this shrinkage thing lol ?. Great limerick, good luck in the contest Viv.