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As I Was Walking In the Snow

One morning I decided to go for a walk on the tightly packed snow but I made a mistake and stepped out on a lake now my bits have all shrivelled, you know! February 19th 2018 For contest 'As I was walking in the snow', sponsor Kevin Shaw

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Date: 4/12/2018 11:02:00 AM
Snow and ice is not my thing I always slip and fall... my rump is always sore.. enjoyed reading, Viv... Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:13:00 PM
You should have that looked at Tim. Trust me....I'm a nurse.
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Date: 2/20/2018 9:43:00 AM
Ok...I know,I shouldn't be laughing...could have easily been me, except we don't have lakes in Malta:))Hope you're sitting by a nice, warm heater! Regards // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/20/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, Paul, a fictional tale, but it helped break the ice. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/19/2018 12:06:00 PM
Hilarious! Hugs Jan
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/20/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Jan, bits back to.normal. I think. Viv x
Date: 2/19/2018 6:57:00 AM
relax Viv, they should come back out in the spring.....
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Date: 2/19/2018 1:31:00 AM
- Well done, Viv :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 12:12:00 AM
Lol! Wasn't expecting the ending. Fun read.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/19/2018 12:13:00 AM
Date: 2/19/2018 12:11:00 AM
Lol! Wasn't expecting the ending. Fun read.
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:40:00 PM
Haha, why is it only men suffer this shrinkage thing lol ?. Great limerick, good luck in the contest Viv.
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