As I Was Walking In the Snow

While walking in the snow in my dream
a stalker blew my whole serene snow scene
threw snowballs at it
which it coughed out and spit
chase resumed by a snow blowing machine


2-17-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 5:31 AM
I can picture the scene lol;-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:20 AM
It is more like out of a scene from a nightmare lol! thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Jan; appreciate it!~hugs Che xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Quite the dream! Fun one!
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Just an imaginary one (thank God lol!); Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; appreciate it!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:38 AM
At least you got to wake up in your warm bed lol. Tom
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Thank God because in my fictional dream I imagine being saturated with snow lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)
Gupta Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Enjoyed the Limerick ...
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:14 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Probir; glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate it!~Che :)
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