As I Was Walking In the Snow

walking in the soft snow one day
purse empty awaiting my pay 
a snowdrop  I could see
as though saying to me
riches can be found in many ways.

Penned 17/02/2018

Contest : As I was walking in the snow... run by..Kevin Shaw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/3/2018 2:59:00 PM
One of my faves for the wonderful message, congratulations on your win seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/2/2018 8:08:00 PM
A nice one ..congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:14:00 PM
Back with warm congrats, Seren. Most delightful poem.
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Date: 2/23/2018 12:10:00 AM
Took me a second to get this! being dyslexic, but I got it!!! LOL Loved the poem and the message!!!
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Date: 2/17/2018 12:40:00 PM
Awesome limerick, Seren. Really adorable.
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Date: 2/17/2018 11:16:00 AM
- A lovely last line in this great limerick, Seren :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2018 4:18:00 PM
lol dont know where the word joy came from lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2018 1:38:00 PM
Hi thank you for commenting, yes the last line is true, money is good but if you joy look around many things will bring you joy....Seren
Date: 2/17/2018 10:20:00 AM
Absolutely charming seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/17/2018 1:36:00 PM
wow Jan thanks for comment....Seren
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