As I Was Walking In the Snow

walking in the soft snow one day
purse empty awaiting my pay 
a snowdrop  I could see
as though saying to me
riches can be found in many ways.

Penned 17/02/2018

Contest : As I was walking in the snow... run by..Kevin Shaw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 2:59 PM
One of my faves for the wonderful message, congratulations on your win seren:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:08 PM
A nice one ..congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Back with warm congrats, Seren. Most delightful poem.
Vaso Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Took me a second to get this! being dyslexic, but I got it!!! LOL Loved the poem and the message!!!
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Awesome limerick, Seren. Really adorable.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM
- A lovely last line in this great limerick, Seren :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs :)
Roberts Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 4:18 PM
lol dont know where the word joy came from lol
Roberts Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Hi thank you for commenting, yes the last line is true, money is good but if you joy look around many things will bring you joy....Seren
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Absolutely charming seren:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:36 PM
wow Jan thanks for comment....Seren
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