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As I Was Walking In the Snow

On a dim day I was walking in snow From where the blizzard came I did not know Brought a girl in eastern dress She was draped in great distress When the wind blew away her kimono.
February 16, 2018. Lines 1,2,5 :10 syllables each Lines 3,4 : 7 syllables each.

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Date: 2/19/2018 12:30:00 PM
hahaha, you found a great last rhyme with kimono!! wish I had seen that word in my rhyming dictionary. GREAT job.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/19/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. That word just flashed, not from rhyming dictionary.
Date: 2/16/2018 5:29:00 AM
Very funnu sublimal I love that final line! Hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/17/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for visiting and for appreciating.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/17/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for visiting and for appreciating.

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