Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Limerick

As I Was Walking In the Snow

On a dim day I was walking in snow
From where the blizzard came I did not know
Brought a girl in eastern dress
She was draped in great distress
When the wind blew away her kimono.

February 16, 2018.
Lines 1,2,5 :10 syllables each
Lines 3,4 : 7 syllables each.

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Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2018 at 12:30 PM hahaha, you found a great last rhyme with kimono!! wish I had seen that word in my rhyming dictionary. GREAT job. Subimal Sinha-Roy February 19, 2018 at 11:11 PM Thank you, Andrea. That word just flashed, not from rhyming dictionary.

Jan Allison February 16, 2018 at 5:29 AM Very funnu sublimal I love that final line! Hugs Jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy February 17, 2018 at 1:51 AM Thank you, Jan for visiting and for appreciating. Subimal Sinha-Roy February 17, 2018 at 1:51 AM Thank you, Jan for visiting and for appreciating.