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As I Stare Through the Glass Window

As i stare through my glass window, I see your face; sun-kissed, Your eyes match the sunrise that i admire so much. All is still. A silent breeze disturbs the movement, As the sun says goodbye for the day. Again I see your face, All is clear now, What I am looking at, A vast reflection of what i used to be. I was like the the sunrise, People couldn't wait until I was " Up in the sky," But now they treat me like the sunset, As beautiful as i am in the sky, They can't wait until i drift down (out of sight). Jonesy 2016 ©

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Date: 12/15/2016 4:42:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today.
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:20:00 PM
Calalusiana Jones, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:31:00 PM
Poet Jonesy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/21/2016 7:25:00 AM
Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much.Very meaningful & deep write. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Calalusiana Jones
Date: 9/21/2016 6:05:00 PM
thank u

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