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As I Play My Sitar

So many times I've wished on a star Still not rich, it ain't working so far Perhaps if I cheat And offer a treat Like a girl star to cuddle while I play my sitar © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 8/23/2015 9:26:00 AM
Grandpa Troll says your most proficient at playing young Ladies hearts! Like Tim. What? He wants you to give him a girl friend for Christmas! Says he tried reading some of Tim's romantic words, But when he comes to town the ladies run around. For cover! Yep! They dissappear. We sugested Love potion #9 from our neighbor witches. But they won't give it to him. Seems, they are afraid they'd be the target! Smart witches! I keep telling him a Lady Troll wouldn't run... He shuttered and agreed! LOL
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Date: 8/23/2015 7:58:00 AM
A nice gesture my friend.... Good morning Jackson
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2015 8:09:00 AM
I thought so too!!! Good morning Timothy!
Date: 8/23/2015 7:32:00 AM
- Wealth is not happiness ..... play your sitar ... laugh and smile, Jack :) - (not so much time to "soup" the last few weeks) - I wish you a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2015 7:36:00 AM
You are such a sweetie, still my Soup friend No. 1!!!! Love and big hugs, Jack xxx