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As I Play My Sitar

So many times I've wished on a star
Still not rich, it ain't working so far
Perhaps if I cheat
And offer a treat
Like a girl star to cuddle while I play my sitar


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

August 23, 2015 at 9:26 AM

Grandpa Troll says your most proficient at playing young Ladies hearts! Like Tim. What? He wants you to give him a girl friend for Christmas! Says he tried reading some of Tim's romantic words, But when he comes to town the ladies run around. For cover! Yep! They dissappear. We sugested Love potion #9 from our neighbor witches. But they won't give it to him. Seems, they are afraid they'd be the target! Smart witches! I keep telling him a Lady Troll wouldn't run... He shuttered and agreed! LOL

Tim Smith

August 23, 2015 at 7:58 AM

A nice gesture my friend.... Good morning Jackson

Jack Ellison

August 23, 2015 at 8:09 AM

I thought so too!!! Good morning Timothy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 23, 2015 at 7:32 AM

- Wealth is not happiness ..... play your sitar ... laugh and smile, Jack :) - (not so much time to "soup" the last few weeks) - I wish you a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

August 23, 2015 at 7:36 AM

You are such a sweetie, still my Soup friend No. 1!!!! Love and big hugs, Jack xxx

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