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As I Pass Away the Day

"As I walk towards the night, I draft away from within reality, To enter a mind that's towards the warmth, Thoughts that cross my seeds within my mind, To find the the beauty to and see each day, To many I'm a hippy trippy person, From the positive mind even through negativity, And finally from seeing the moon across my window, Closed my eyes to finally dream away within the beauty my mind has viewed...." -Ds-

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Date: 4/26/2023 5:33:00 PM
Lost in one's thoughts. I like it,Daniel. (typo line 5) What people think is overrated:)
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Daniel Stafford
Date: 5/3/2023 10:22:00 AM
Really do appreciate to hear you view... :) Much appreciation once again.
Date: 4/26/2023 2:04:00 PM
Creative lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Daniel Stafford
Date: 5/3/2023 10:23:00 AM
So much appreciation to hear.... :)

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