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As I Look At the World

As I look at the world outside my window I see the rush of traffic slowly slither by While the tattered man on the corner cries. As some wispy white clouds crawl across the sky I see the rush of traffic slowly slither by, And some benevolent black birds fly out of view As some wispy white clouds crawl across the sky. A million green leaves wave in a tender breeze And some benevolent black birds fly out of view. While the tattered man on the corner cries A million green leaves wave in a tender breeze, As I look at the world outside my window.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/10/2010 2:18:00 PM
Life goes on while the tattered man on the corner cries..Great conveyance of this idea..I enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2010 9:52:00 AM
I love this form....please name the black bird for we readers I see a crow and they are not benevolent! Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2010 4:59:00 PM
A very fine theme you have chosen. and nice flow of feelings. Good luck in the contest
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