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As I Lay In My Bed

As i lie in my lovely warm bed Listening to the wind outside I think about my Friends Wondering if i have really tried. Tried to make people happy Helped them when asked Bothered to listen to them Or was i just too laxed My patience isnt  my strongest point Not with people anyway But animals can have  all my time To walk them and to play. Hope my friends realise Friendship hold no bounds I dont really  mean it  The way it sounds. When i am grumpy It's the pain thats speaking Not the way i'm thinking Not the words i'm seeking But friends understand this Look past what is said Know the real me As I lay in my bed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/3/2013 9:28:00 PM
This is what you think about when you're lying in bed? I know about a lack of patience, that's one of my strong points, I mean defects haha. Nice poem Estrella brillosa.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 1:38:00 AM
thanks Wayland...Seren
Date: 6/21/2012 12:16:00 AM
You are starting to remind me of myself. It brings a smile to my face.. :o)
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Date: 6/20/2012 4:43:00 AM
excellent!!! true friends indeed
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:55:00 AM
A good friend always care ....(even in bed) - well written poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/17/2012 9:51:00 PM
I liked it very much.
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Date: 6/15/2012 1:41:00 PM
very nice seren your friends understand .love this poem
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