As I Lay In My Bed

As i lie in my lovely warm bed
Listening to the wind outside
I think about my Friends
Wondering if i have really tried.

Tried to make people happy
Helped them when asked
Bothered to listen to them
Or was i just too laxed

My patience isnt  my strongest point
Not with people anyway
But animals can have  all my time
To walk them and to play.

Hope my friends realise
Friendship hold no bounds
I dont really  mean it 
The way it sounds.

When i am grumpy
It's the pain thats speaking
Not the way i'm thinking
Not the words i'm seeking

But friends understand this
Look past what is said
Know the real me
As I lay in my bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bunch Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 9:28 PM
This is what you think about when you're lying in bed? I know about a lack of patience, that's one of my strong points, I mean defects haha. Nice poem Estrella brillosa.
Roberts Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 1:38 AM
thanks Wayland...Seren
Kearley Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 12:16 AM
You are starting to remind me of myself. It brings a smile to my face.. :o)
Palli Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 4:43 AM
excellent!!! true friends indeed
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:55 AM
A good friend always care ....(even in bed) - well written poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Singleton Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 9:51 PM
I liked it very much.
Ishmael Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 1:41 PM
very nice seren your friends understand .love this poem
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