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As I Lay At the Streets...

I closed my eyes and slipped into the world. Where the valley was green and the sun rays gold. As I walked the grass my feet felt cold; My heart felt a warmth unseen, untold. I walked to the stream and wondered why, The real world was uglier, as i watched the birds fly. Why a murderer would kill, why a lover betray? Why a soldier joined battles, but his family would stay? Why a man could discriminate black and white? Why the world could never overcome the selfish-tide? Why could I find pleasure in only my dream place? Why contentment touched, only the ocean's surface? I turned exhausted and began to gasp for air, I could feel the darkness come, which was never there. I knew from within that this world would be gone; When I am back awake, my clothes will still be torn...

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Date: 10/3/2010 9:41:00 AM
great write!
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:06:00 AM
Love is the only formula to right the world, and those who love must suffer to do the right. Enjoyed the reading
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vincel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 11:25:00 PM
Very profound questions. The new world devoid of suffering and violence will soon be here! (2Peter 3:13)
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Date: 9/30/2010 6:27:00 PM
Powerful thoughts and feelings in this one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/30/2010 12:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your expressive and creative write today.. hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/30/2010 9:55:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
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