As I Lay

As I woke up in the morning,
I didn't smell your sweet scent,
I miss your smile as you began to go down.
As our eye's meet,while you continue to eat.
The moan's you make,
as if your eating a piece cake.
You lick me like I'm a limondrop,
as I stroke you keeping you hard as a rock.
As the blood rushes to both of our heads,
our body's melting into the bed.
I take your hand into mine,
as our body's intertwine.
I look up at you, one last time,
saying  to myself  you'll alway's be mine.
Then I realize I'm stareing at a wall,
and you were never really here at all!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nealy Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:37 AM
omg so in love with this poem! great write and congrats on being featured
Irisha Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Awww thanks Monica.
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February 15, 2013 at 5:10 PM
wow..Twanna, you should enter this in Cyndi's spicy contest.., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"
Irisha Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Poet destroyer :-)
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May 18, 2012 at 4:40 PM
Wow!!! No comment..lol..smh
Irisha Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:47 PM
lol...oh wow I hope dats a good thing.
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 3:52 PM
A real "Cold Shower" read!!! great flow... Michael
Irisha Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Lol...thanks Michael...so silly....lol...thank you. :)
Seraphin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:58 AM
* "PS. I FIND MYSELF COMPLETELY MESMERIZED BY THE FIRST FEW LINES OF THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM * 'SWEET SCENTS * EYES MEETING * MOANS' * I LOVE IT * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * TWAS JUST STOPPING BACK BY TO THANK YOU LOVELY FOR THE KIND VISIT * JOY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Irisha Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Aww! ...Thank you Sarah :)
Seraphin Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 11:48 AM
* "PS. * I MUST FAVOURITE YOUR BEAUTY * BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * A JEWEL TO FOREVER BE CHERISHED * KEEP PAINTING MY DEAR * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Irisha Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Aww your da best! :)
Seraphin Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 11:45 AM
* "OWWW, BUT WHAT A SWEEET DREAM * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * I LOVE THE EROTIC & DETAILED INTENSITY & PASSION WITHIN YOUR RADIANT BEAUTIES MAGNIFICENT PAINTING * CAPTURES HEARTS & SETS AFLAME BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS & DREAMS * BURN DOWN THE WALLS THAT LOVE MAY RISE * BEYOUND THE EDGES OF TIME * PURE BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Irisha Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Sarah... Im so happy you enjoyed reading it :)
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