As I Flew On Waxen Wings

Sudden was the descent of poetry on me
I tottered under its weight
My body heated up like the sun
A frying egg yolk on the pan
My blood started burning…. burning
A strange madness crept across my senses
Intoxicated as by an excess dose of ale
Or drunk with the vintage wine
Or by some mystical disengagement
I started levitating
Wings sprouted up suddenly on my sides
 
Scenes flash past before my mind’s eye!

I reeled round and round
Flew up and up
Meteors flashed past
Stars blinked
Large celestial bodies stood still
Strange sounds fleeted past my ears
My heart palpitated,
Like the rumblings of thunder
My eyes glowed like fire balls

A shout I heard afar
Over the heavens’ mysterious rim
Muffled though, I could decipher it;
“Welcome to the clan of blessed bards”!

Around me, I saw multitudes of poets
Young and old, their faces blazing
Like a thousand lanterns lit
In that blinding brilliance
My filmy wings burnt outright!

Like Icarus, from the heights
I flopped down to the chasm below
In the scattered heap of flesh and bones
A faint stir …..
The feeble flutter of a poetic heart

Before it was finally stilled,
I woke up from the drowsiness of a dream!

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Wolf Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Gosh, you really 'pulled my leg' on this one, Valsa. What you described seem so real to me, as it reminded me of the amazing rush when all of this poetry started gushing out of me four years ago -- from absolutely nowhere! Enjoyed the poem very much. Inspiration + Perspiration = Poetry ~ gw
George Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:30 PM
You started just four years ago and in such a short time could 'mint out' thousands of poems. A big salute to you dear friend Gershon !Thank you so much for your beautiful comment !
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 4:28 AM
You soar high my friend with apt simile and metaphors. You buoy on your poetic wings to reach new heights. Well done as always, Valsa.
George Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:28 AM
People like you inspire me ! Thanks a lot for being an inspiration, always! Much obliged!
Daniel Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 4:19 AM
This is beyond amazing poetry, Valsa, you slay us all with your writings:)
George Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:26 AM
'Slay'.... that's a cruel word... Jo! Can I ever slay Goliaths? Lol.... Use a mild one like 'fascinate'! Thank you soooo much!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Icarus may have fallen down, but your poetry soars. Well done, Valsa
George Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thank you so much Victor for giving me always such positive feedback ! :)
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