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As I Flew On Waxen Wings

Sudden was the descent of poetry on me I tottered under its weight My body heated up like the sun A frying egg yolk on the pan My blood started burning…. burning A strange madness crept across my senses Intoxicated as by an excess dose of ale Or drunk with the vintage wine Or by some mystical disengagement I started levitating Wings sprouted up suddenly on my sides Scenes flash past before my mind’s eye! I reeled round and round Flew up and up Meteors flashed past Stars blinked Large celestial bodies stood still Strange sounds fleeted past my ears My heart palpitated, Like the rumblings of thunder My eyes glowed like fire balls A shout I heard afar Over the heavens’ mysterious rim Muffled though, I could decipher it; “Welcome to the clan of blessed bards”! Around me, I saw multitudes of poets Young and old, their faces blazing Like a thousand lanterns lit In that blinding brilliance My filmy wings burnt outright! Like Icarus, from the heights I flopped down to the chasm below In the scattered heap of flesh and bones A faint stir ….. The feeble flutter of a poetic heart Before it was finally stilled, I woke up from the drowsiness of a dream! Poetry Contest 'Your Life Flashes Before Your Eyes' Sponsor- Matt Caliri

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Date: 11/22/2021 6:05:00 PM
Gosh, you really 'pulled my leg' on this one, Valsa. What you described seem so real to me, as it reminded me of the amazing rush when all of this poetry started gushing out of me four years ago -- from absolutely nowhere! Enjoyed the poem very much. Inspiration + Perspiration = Poetry ~ gw
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Valsa George
Date: 11/22/2021 8:30:00 PM
You started just four years ago and in such a short time could 'mint out' thousands of poems. A big salute to you dear friend Gershon !Thank you so much for your beautiful comment !
Date: 11/22/2021 4:28:00 AM
You soar high my friend with apt simile and metaphors. You buoy on your poetic wings to reach new heights. Well done as always, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/22/2021 5:28:00 AM
People like you inspire me ! Thanks a lot for being an inspiration, always! Much obliged!
Date: 11/22/2021 4:19:00 AM
This is beyond amazing poetry, Valsa, you slay us all with your writings:)
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Valsa George
Date: 11/22/2021 5:26:00 AM
'Slay'.... that's a cruel word... Jo! Can I ever slay Goliaths? Lol.... Use a mild one like 'fascinate'! Thank you soooo much!
Date: 11/22/2021 3:46:00 AM
Icarus may have fallen down, but your poetry soars. Well done, Valsa
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Valsa George
Date: 11/22/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for giving me always such positive feedback ! :)

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