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As I Dream

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There beyond the afterlife a glimpse of a passing star 
an orbing light that flickers in submergence with the dawn
The memories of a life exuding all that none can mar 
a revival of affection, in shades of gold and brawn

Way down yonder my lonely thoughts explore       
aside your Divine Light and Radiance 
this hungry heart is wanting more    
I dip inside a memory like an old romance  

Dancing dreams of lovers flickering so bright   
a pacification of senses, I am bathed in your light 
there beyond the afterlife a glimpse, a shooting star
I would love to meet you once again but you live way to far.

Copyright © Mystic Rose Rose | Year Posted 2022

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Roger Roger Date: 9/3/2022 11:29:00 PM As beautiful as you my dear. It reminds me of the one who got away Login to Reply

Tim Kitchen Date: 8/18/2022 7:21:00 AM Beautifully put, a lovely poem. Tim Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/14/2022 6:56:00 AM Hi Vienna, I am sorry I missed this Poem Of The Day. I have been having laptop problems, again. I am dropping by with me congratulations on your Poem Of The Day honour, with this exceptional write. Love and Hugs always ..... Mike. Login to Reply

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 8/13/2022 1:29:00 PM But you live way too far." A lovely poem of love and loss.. Congrats on top 100! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/8/2022 11:17:00 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Daisy Meadows Date: 8/6/2022 11:01:00 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/6/2022 10:30:00 PM Ah -- 'Never say never' when you wish upon a star! Beautiful thoughts, Mystic Rose, and Congrats on POTD! Galaxies and Nebulae, Gershon Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 8/6/2022 10:21:00 PM Vie congratulations my dear. Login to Reply

Coy Bothwell Date: 8/6/2022 9:20:00 PM HELLO..thnk you for your poem Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/6/2022 8:21:00 PM Vie, this is incredibly beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD honor! I am saving this gem to my Faves. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/6/2022 6:15:00 PM "I am bathed in your light." Such a wonderful place to be. Your thoughts are beautiful, emotional and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Vienna, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/6/2022 4:19:00 PM Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Rose. An ethereal feeling of "dancing dreams" - that's what I experience reading your nostalgic depiction of a "hungry heart"..the phrases from your creative quill flow without hindrance. Love and hugs ~ Mala Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 8/6/2022 3:07:00 PM To be bathed in the light and radiance of the Divine is a glorious thought to dwell upon. Such lovely imagery and dreamy depiction of that blissful state. Congrats on your POTD, Rose. I enjoyed this very much ~ John Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/6/2022 12:36:00 PM Beautifully enchanting, congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply

Robert Gorelick Date: 8/6/2022 10:54:00 AM An ethereal, romantic, cosmically delightful pleasure. Congratulations on your POTD! Robert Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 8/6/2022 9:49:00 AM The very definition of the word "ethereal" Mystic! with a device actually, I employ frequently, and sometimes, I won't begin a poem until this device is created, am speaking of the "first line hook" your 1st line as good as any I've read (I have hundreds of poetry books!) followed by "slammer!" line 2! first stanza stands alone...to mine faves Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/6/2022 9:39:00 AM Hi Rose, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on its POTD honor! Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM Enjoyed your poem a lot, Vie, and I wanted to congratulate you on your P.O.T.D. Do enjoy all of the congrats on this, your, day! Login to Reply

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 8/6/2022 8:24:00 AM Dear Vie, so true to your ethereal poetry form~congratulations on your stunning POTD! Hope you have a celebratory week-end! XO P Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 8/6/2022 8:14:00 AM I love this Rose . So delicious and full of nuance and emotion and want. Orbs of flickering light , dancing dreams of lovers and a dip inside a memory … like and old romance . Magical ! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/6/2022 8:00:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. "As I Dream" is a lovely write. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away............ Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/6/2022 7:56:00 AM Oh so Lovely Vie. I am enraptured. Congratulations on POTD! Linda Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 8/6/2022 7:48:00 AM Back with CONGRATULATIONS on your POTD with this mesmerizing piece. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 8/6/2022 6:55:00 AM Dear Rose, your radiant pen spills nostalgic beauty, an ethereal musing filled with sweet yearning for a lost love so bright.. a hungry heart, dancing dreams and a shooting star.. the stuff great romantic poetry is made of. "in shades of gold and brawn" - I especially adore this verse. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD. Such a wonderful and worthy choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/6/2022 6:33:00 AM Wonderful poem. Great POTD, hugs. Login to Reply

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