Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

As I Dream

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There beyond the afterlife a glimpse of a passing star 
an orbing light that flickers in submergence with the dawn
The memories of a life exuding all that none can mar 
a revival of affection, in shades of gold and brawn

Way down yonder my lonely thoughts explore       
aside your Divine Light and Radiance 
this hungry heart is wanting more    
I dip inside a memory like an old romance  

Dancing dreams of lovers flickering so bright   
a pacification of senses, I am bathed in your light 
there beyond the afterlife a glimpse, a shooting star
I would love to meet you once again but you live way to far.

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Roger Roger September 3, 2022 at 11:29 PM As beautiful as you my dear. It reminds me of the one who got away

Tim Kitchen August 18, 2022 at 7:21 AM Beautifully put, a lovely poem. Tim

Vladislav Raven August 14, 2022 at 6:56 AM Hi Vienna, I am sorry I missed this Poem Of The Day. I have been having laptop problems, again. I am dropping by with me congratulations on your Poem Of The Day honour, with this exceptional write. Love and Hugs always ..... Mike.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian August 13, 2022 at 1:29 PM But you live way too far." A lovely poem of love and loss.. Congrats on top 100!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2022 at 11:17 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daisy Meadows August 6, 2022 at 11:01 PM Congratulations on your POTD.

Gershon Wolf August 6, 2022 at 10:30 PM Ah -- 'Never say never' when you wish upon a star! Beautiful thoughts, Mystic Rose, and Congrats on POTD! Galaxies and Nebulae, Gershon

Michael Tor August 6, 2022 at 10:21 PM Vie congratulations my dear.

Coy Bothwell August 6, 2022 at 9:20 PM HELLO..thnk you for your poem

Connie Marcum Wong August 6, 2022 at 8:21 PM Vie, this is incredibly beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD honor! I am saving this gem to my Faves. Blessings xxoo

Brandy Nicole August 6, 2022 at 6:15 PM "I am bathed in your light." Such a wonderful place to be. Your thoughts are beautiful, emotional and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Vienna, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 6, 2022 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Rose. An ethereal feeling of "dancing dreams" - that's what I experience reading your nostalgic depiction of a "hungry heart"..the phrases from your creative quill flow without hindrance. Love and hugs ~ Mala

John Watt August 6, 2022 at 3:07 PM To be bathed in the light and radiance of the Divine is a glorious thought to dwell upon. Such lovely imagery and dreamy depiction of that blissful state. Congrats on your POTD, Rose. I enjoyed this very much ~ John

Tania Kitchin August 6, 2022 at 12:36 PM Beautifully enchanting, congratulations on POTD!

Robert Gorelick August 6, 2022 at 10:54 AM An ethereal, romantic, cosmically delightful pleasure. Congratulations on your POTD! Robert

James Marshall Goff August 6, 2022 at 9:49 AM The very definition of the word "ethereal" Mystic! with a device actually, I employ frequently, and sometimes, I won't begin a poem until this device is created, am speaking of the "first line hook" your 1st line as good as any I've read (I have hundreds of poetry books!) followed by "slammer!" line 2! first stanza stands alone...to mine faves

Valsa George August 6, 2022 at 9:39 AM Hi Rose, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on its POTD honor!

L Milton Hankins August 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM Enjoyed your poem a lot, Vie, and I wanted to congratulate you on your P.O.T.D. Do enjoy all of the congrats on this, your, day!

Paulette Calasibetta August 6, 2022 at 8:24 AM Dear Vie, so true to your ethereal poetry form~congratulations on your stunning POTD! Hope you have a celebratory week-end! XO P

Susan Lawrence August 6, 2022 at 8:14 AM I love this Rose . So delicious and full of nuance and emotion and want. Orbs of flickering light , dancing dreams of lovers and a dip inside a memory … like and old romance . Magical ! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2022 at 8:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. "As I Dream" is a lovely write. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away............

Linda Alice Fowler August 6, 2022 at 7:56 AM Oh so Lovely Vie. I am enraptured. Congratulations on POTD! Linda

JC Brul August 6, 2022 at 7:48 AM Back with CONGRATULATIONS on your POTD with this mesmerizing piece.

Susan Ashley August 6, 2022 at 6:55 AM Dear Rose, your radiant pen spills nostalgic beauty, an ethereal musing filled with sweet yearning for a lost love so bright.. a hungry heart, dancing dreams and a shooting star.. the stuff great romantic poetry is made of. "in shades of gold and brawn" - I especially adore this verse. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD. Such a wonderful and worthy choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar August 6, 2022 at 6:33 AM Wonderful poem. Great POTD, hugs.

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