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As I Dream

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OeJWKSbbq68 There beyond the afterlife a glimpse of a passing star an orbing light that flickers in submergence with the dawn The memories of a life exuding all that none can mar a revival of affection, in shades of gold and brawn Way down yonder my lonely thoughts explore aside your Divine Light and Radiance this hungry heart is wanting more I dip inside a memory like an old romance Dancing dreams of lovers flickering so bright a pacification of senses, I am bathed in your light there beyond the afterlife a glimpse, a shooting star I would love to meet you once again but you live way to far.

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Roger Roger

Date: 9/3/2022 11:29:00 PM

As beautiful as you my dear. It reminds me of the one who got away

Tim Kitchen

Date: 8/18/2022 7:21:00 AM

Beautifully put, a lovely poem. Tim

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/14/2022 6:56:00 AM

Hi Vienna, I am sorry I missed this Poem Of The Day. I have been having laptop problems, again. I am dropping by with me congratulations on your Poem Of The Day honour, with this exceptional write. Love and Hugs always ..... Mike.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 8/13/2022 1:29:00 PM

But you live way too far." A lovely poem of love and loss.. Congrats on top 100!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2022 11:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 8/6/2022 11:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/6/2022 10:30:00 PM

Ah -- 'Never say never' when you wish upon a star! Beautiful thoughts, Mystic Rose, and Congrats on POTD! Galaxies and Nebulae, Gershon

Michael Tor

Date: 8/6/2022 10:21:00 PM

Vie congratulations my dear.

Coy Bothwell

Date: 8/6/2022 9:20:00 PM

HELLO..thnk you for your poem

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/6/2022 8:21:00 PM

Vie, this is incredibly beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD honor! I am saving this gem to my Faves. Blessings xxoo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/6/2022 6:15:00 PM

"I am bathed in your light." Such a wonderful place to be. Your thoughts are beautiful, emotional and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Vienna, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/6/2022 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Rose. An ethereal feeling of "dancing dreams" - that's what I experience reading your nostalgic depiction of a "hungry heart"..the phrases from your creative quill flow without hindrance. Love and hugs ~ Mala

Jthingz Abdul

Date: 8/6/2022 3:39:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

John Watt

Date: 8/6/2022 3:07:00 PM

To be bathed in the light and radiance of the Divine is a glorious thought to dwell upon. Such lovely imagery and dreamy depiction of that blissful state. Congrats on your POTD, Rose. I enjoyed this very much ~ John

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/6/2022 12:36:00 PM

Beautifully enchanting, congratulations on POTD!

Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/6/2022 10:54:00 AM

An ethereal, romantic, cosmically delightful pleasure. Congratulations on your POTD! Robert

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/6/2022 9:49:00 AM

The very definition of the word "ethereal" Mystic! with a device actually, I employ frequently, and sometimes, I won't begin a poem until this device is created, am speaking of the "first line hook" your 1st line as good as any I've read (I have hundreds of poetry books!) followed by "slammer!" line 2! first stanza stands alone...to mine faves

Valsa George

Date: 8/6/2022 9:39:00 AM

Hi Rose, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on its POTD honor!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem a lot, Vie, and I wanted to congratulate you on your P.O.T.D. Do enjoy all of the congrats on this, your, day!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/6/2022 8:24:00 AM

Dear Vie, so true to your ethereal poetry form~congratulations on your stunning POTD! Hope you have a celebratory week-end! XO P

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/6/2022 8:14:00 AM

I love this Rose . So delicious and full of nuance and emotion and want. Orbs of flickering light , dancing dreams of lovers and a dip inside a memory … like and old romance . Magical ! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/6/2022 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. "As I Dream" is a lovely write. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/6/2022 7:56:00 AM

Oh so Lovely Vie. I am enraptured. Congratulations on POTD! Linda

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/6/2022 7:48:00 AM

Back with CONGRATULATIONS on your POTD with this mesmerizing piece.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/6/2022 6:55:00 AM

Dear Rose, your radiant pen spills nostalgic beauty, an ethereal musing filled with sweet yearning for a lost love so bright.. a hungry heart, dancing dreams and a shooting star.. the stuff great romantic poetry is made of. "in shades of gold and brawn" - I especially adore this verse. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD. Such a wonderful and worthy choice! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan