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As I Always Put You First Before Me

Ive lost your loving feeling You left me all alone To struggle in my despair. I've lost your loving feeling For you no longer care. I've truly tried my best though As ive put you first in line. I put you before everything in life paths But I felt that you were no longer mine. But I will continue trying To get back the love we once had. We surely can't have lost our loving ways There's been such good times with the bad. So now I verse my apologies To let you see how deeply that I feel. And in hope tat you can find it in your heart To seek what love we had so real. But am I wasting efforts IS it just a waste of time? Do you even love me anymore Though loves grew out its prime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/11/2020 4:17:00 PM
I can feel this. Good work
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Date: 11/17/2019 10:22:00 AM
I see this is a reality based poem from the comment I read below. You express with great sincerity your feelings here. I wish you good look with this difficult situation.
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Anna Tate
Date: 11/25/2019 10:24:00 AM
Aw thank you for your kind words x
Date: 11/15/2019 11:27:00 PM
Hi Anna. Is this a personal one or a made up poem? either way its well penned on how the poet is feeling. Thanks for sharing this
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Date: 11/16/2019 9:21:00 PM
Its scary sometimes when you do a poem thats sad or bad cause people that dont know you automatically think its your life. I do quite a bit of poems that arent about me and I have had people respond thinking Its me. Luckily you can respond back and tell them.
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Anna Tate
Date: 11/15/2019 11:58:00 PM
Hi Gregory, yes this is actually a poem I made after my sadness in my past love felt. I don't always based poems on myself but there's a select few that ring so true for me. Thank you for your comment. Much love x

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