Anna Tate Poet Blank verse

As I Always Put You First Before Me

Ive lost your loving feeling
You left me all alone
To struggle in my despair.
I've lost your loving feeling
For you no longer care.

I've truly tried my best though
As ive put you first in line.
I put you before everything in life paths
But I felt that you were no longer mine.

But I will continue trying
To get back the love we once had.
We surely can't have lost our loving ways
There's been such good times with the bad.

So now I verse my apologies
To let you see how deeply that I feel.
And in hope tat you can find it in your heart
To seek what love we had so real.

But am I wasting efforts
IS it just a waste of time?
Do you even love me anymore
Though loves grew out its prime.

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Beata Agustin December 23, 2025 at 4:28 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Khurram Khan January 11, 2020 at 4:17 PM I can feel this. Good work

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2019 at 10:22 AM I see this is a reality based poem from the comment I read below. You express with great sincerity your feelings here. I wish you good look with this difficult situation. Anna Tate November 25, 2019 at 10:24 AM Aw thank you for your kind words x

Na Na November 15, 2019 at 11:27 PM Hi Anna. Is this a personal one or a made up poem? either way its well penned on how the poet is feeling. Thanks for sharing this Na Na November 16, 2019 at 9:21 PM Its scary sometimes when you do a poem thats sad or bad cause people that dont know you automatically think its your life. I do quite a bit of poems that arent about me and I have had people respond thinking Its me. Luckily you can respond back and tell them. Anna Tate November 15, 2019 at 11:58 PM Hi Gregory, yes this is actually a poem I made after my sadness in my past love felt. I don't always based poems on myself but there's a select few that ring so true for me. Thank you for your comment. Much love x