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as expected

a child's kite
lifted by the breeze
as expected

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2024 4:00:00 AM

We expect it, but sometimes it doesn't happen. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K

Robert Schatz
Date: 2/24/2024 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Sara.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/14/2024 6:34:00 PM

Dear Robert, the straight-faced humor of your fine Senryu comes through in your last line. Life is wonderful when things go as expected. The lovely imagery in the first two lines sets up your last line perfectly. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Robert Schatz
Date: 2/25/2024 6:26:00 PM

A belated thank you for your comments Susan.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/13/2024 5:07:00 PM

Nice Senryu, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Robert Schatz
Date: 2/25/2024 6:27:00 PM

A belated thank you for your comment Bill

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 2/11/2024 10:17:00 AM

Lovely write

Robert Schatz
Date: 2/11/2024 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Yolanda!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2024 1:56:00 AM

Somethings are just expected, and never fail to feel us thinking, “ as expected “ a very clever and deeply meaningful senryu: you have a way with painting imagery and conveying thoughts in few syllables in such eloquence . Pleasure reading this. Sending you light

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/31/2024 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Ink Express. I hope the humor comes through.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2024 1:11:00 PM

the middle line is a great way to say it. Very nice

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/30/2024 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I hope the humorous intent comes through.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/30/2024 3:44:00 AM

This is a great write, dear Robert, the imagery of a flying kite and being lifted by the breeze, it's meaningful and delicate both, in its essence.. Crafted in a quite clever and intriguing way..

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/30/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Hiya! Your support means a lot. I hope the humorous intent comes through.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 11:23:00 PM

Great haiku dear Robert with carefully chosen words to form an image of a flying kite. Love the title too incorporated into the verse. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :):)

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/30/2024 2:07:00 AM

Thank you Christina! I hope the humor comes through.