as expected

We expect it, but sometimes it doesn't happen. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K

Dear Robert, the straight-faced humor of your fine Senryu comes through in your last line. Life is wonderful when things go as expected. The lovely imagery in the first two lines sets up your last line perfectly. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Nice Senryu, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Lovely write

Somethings are just expected, and never fail to feel us thinking, “ as expected “ a very clever and deeply meaningful senryu: you have a way with painting imagery and conveying thoughts in few syllables in such eloquence . Pleasure reading this. Sending you light

the middle line is a great way to say it. Very nice

This is a great write, dear Robert, the imagery of a flying kite and being lifted by the breeze, it's meaningful and delicate both, in its essence.. Crafted in a quite clever and intriguing way..

Great haiku dear Robert with carefully chosen words to form an image of a flying kite. Love the title too incorporated into the verse. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :):)

That is a clever senryu. I can visualize the kite.

Thank you Sotto. I hope the humor comes through

Nicely penned haiku, you conveyed nice imagery with your own words.

I don't have any particular training :)