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As Esoteric As Secrets

Why should thoughts, ideas and dreams be as esoteric as secrets? Turn them into poetry, and share them with the entire Humanity... I have shared mine with all without ambiguity! No fortress, stately rising into the vast skies, can escape the battering storms so damageable, and not tumble down...to lay in ruins as others have; here's your only chance to be immortal: be a wide river which can withstand tides! Why should a literary work be as esoteric as secrets, to remind the worst humiliation? Don't pass under the yoke for a defeat, be daring, fearless, challenging and brief; do lucky survivors ever submit their will to desperation? And should you be disheartened by a wrong choice? Don't cuss fate or damn yourself for bumpy roads; instead of complaining, look on the brighter side: dare to make a difference with the gift of words... by giving your dead language a more vibrant voice! Verse: a metrical or rhymed composition as distinct from Prose: Poetry Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 8/3/2011 10:32:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on having two poems make it to first round competition in PS contest..G.L. luv.
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:12:00 PM
Great job moving to very good pieces foward!!! Charge! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:23:00 PM
congrats on your win with this unique entry, Andrew. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/17/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest " Forms of Poetry 101". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:48:00 AM
congrats on your win with this beautiful poem
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:11:00 AM
Important message for us to remember, Andrew, and you wrote your poem so well! Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:24:00 PM
Great entry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:15:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrew
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:12:00 PM
Wow, you chose a more difficult way to go and did a great job. BG
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:40:00 PM
Congrats Andrew my friend on your winning poem in Poetry Forms 101 contest.. a super new write and specail win ..enjoy my friend.. with luv from Italy.. caio..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:01:00 AM
I agree with you Andrew, imagine that secrets and poetry.. Mine would be super wild poems..Kidding.. I truly loved your poem,..LeeAnn
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