Notes About The Poem

As effective as truth serum

nothing like three glasses of wine
to loosen the tongue and
park inhibitions on the wayside

if only i had known
that's all it takes


AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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June 10, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Hahaha ~ good one!
Thomas Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Haha - Charles Baudelaire agrees with you. Be Drunk is one of my favorite poems by him. It's a very different message but the vibe feels similar. Nice work, Line.
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June 10, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Thank you very much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jaymee ~
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