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I can not be swayed by a stranger's words, they are mere annoyances to my ears. For unlike a murmuration of birds, a stranger's words cannot move me to tears. Only those I let close can betray me; for they're invested with a shield of trust. And because I love them, I do not see the footprints of betrayal in their dust. Truth can be as deafening as silence; when I choose not to hear what others say. And though hope is not an exact science, it's known to hold reality at bay. Betrayal begins with trust, as does love, the one emotion God asks from above.

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Date: 5/27/2023 9:09:00 AM
Emile, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful and excellent poem with us in my Writing Challenge, well done, congratulations and I like the image !
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Date: 5/27/2023 9:41:00 AM
Thanks, Constance; I find your contests are a stimulating challenge that my muse is eager to take on...and as always, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/25/2023 3:28:00 PM
Hi Emile, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2023 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/25/2023 9:38:00 AM
Philosophical poem. Nicely written. Great winner.
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Date: 5/25/2023 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, Jay; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2023 1:16:00 PM
Good one about the concept of betrayal and description of betrayal. Reads like a good contender to me for Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Date: 5/22/2023 2:24:00 PM
Thanks, Sara; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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