As Cupid Thrills

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A paradise rare beckons, cradling our shadows’ whispers to draw fine lips upon mine… while tickled moon peeps. How gently wild passion blooms… when hands caress each other in a flame of surrender, razing a night’s heat. And ember’s scent lingers on prompting rose-moon to quiver till our eyes greet , anew you gaze…I wink back. Into love’s final blooming , we vow under hazel trees names etched on sand, as Cupid marks a sweetened rite! Sweet Valentine Contest For Nayda Ivette Negron Re-posted 1/28/2018

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Date: 2/4/2018 1:37:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 2/2/2018 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this unique and creative poem being honored with Third place Nette! Kudos! : )
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:28:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on this lovely piece :)
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:46:00 AM
Nette, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:08:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic win, Nette. You verses are as unique as your personality. Your imagination is the force that helps to create such amazing scenes. Thank you for your comment yesterday. Merry Christmas from my heart! Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:46:00 AM
Terrific, love the phrasing, wish I was there with you. Then again, nette, you'd probably slap me :) Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:27:00 AM
Nette, *** I find this poem creative, the imagery and the descriptive phrases that envelopes my imagination while I rest reading every line, Yes, you haven't mentioned the particular words of the theme but it's there in a few but you include even the stars, moon and bamboos trembles and thrills… =`) I find that cute and I just couldn't ignore this! BIG CONGRATULATIONS! I thank you for your kind consideration!!! ~hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:53:00 AM
Super syllabic structure abd flow. Again, fascinating phrasing and vivid imagery. '...cradling our shadows' whispers,' 'while tickled moon peeps,' '...prompting mint stars to quiver.' Oh, if I could write like you! BRAVO nette! Keith
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Date: 12/13/2015 1:23:00 AM
So good, so good, so good - oh, girl ... CayCay
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Date: 12/11/2015 12:19:00 PM
Resplendent poem on true love.Your fluid diction makes my heart sing.Off to thrill my wifey!
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Date: 12/11/2015 11:58:00 AM
The affection and final promise touch the heart. Truly a stunning, well-worded poem!
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Date: 12/11/2015 7:15:00 AM
Just brilliant nette what a thrill for me to read this wonderful piece this morning a definite fav and may your God given talent always serve you. Lots of Love, Armand
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