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For "As Autumn's Breeze" contest.

As Autumn's Breeze

As Autumn’s Breeze flicks early flakes
A fleeting blizzard of snow it makes.

While old Jack Frost works hard with glee.
To vividly decorate the trees.

I watch the pond with great delight
For soon ice crystals will unite

To make a glassy slippery mirror
Oh joy, my skating time is near.

Submitted Aug 29, 2016
For As Autumn's Breeze Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Adams Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 1:06 PM
I like it. Well written and doe's the form justice. Thank you for this!! pat
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August 30, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Succinct and well written Beverly! ; ) 7
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August 30, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Connie. Glad you liked it. Beverly
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August 29, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Great winter poem x
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August 29, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Wendy.
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August 29, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Lovely pictorial couplet, Beverly. Good luck with the contest, Barry.
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August 29, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Barry.
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