For "As Autumn's Breeze" contest.
As Autumn’s Breeze flicks early flakes A fleeting blizzard of snow it makes. While old Jack Frost works hard with glee. To vividly decorate the trees. I watch the pond with great delight For soon ice crystals will unite To make a glassy slippery mirror Oh joy, my skating time is near. Submitted Aug 29, 2016 For As Autumn's Breeze Contest
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