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As Autumn's Breeze

Dear Summer’s done and early. As autumn breeze is coming, its breath of coolness brushes on the cheek. Our friend, the sun, is hiding, and rain outside is strumming a lullaby that leaves us feeling bleak. Though charming be fall season, the dark is sooner crawling. Jack Frost arrives to help the days grow cold. And then one crystal morning, the snow flakes will be falling, and vanished be all trace of days of gold. The autumn breeze turns into a blizzard we’ll be hating. Too frigid is the air for us to take. But kids will brave the weather, don mittens, and go skating with merriment upon the frozen lake. Written Aug. 26, 2016 for the contest of Shadow Hamilton: As Autumn's Breeze (made up rhyme scheme: abcdbc)
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Walker Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:04 PM
My great lover of the Summer writes so descriptively of Autumn.
Daniel Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 3:16 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win:) Great to read your lovely poem once again:)
Babcock Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Lovely write Andrea. love phyl
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Great tribute to Autumn! Well done. Sunita :)
Carter Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:24 PM
I won't enjoy the summer ending nearly as much as I enjoyed this poem! Liked the ending a lot
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 1:40 PM
This is my best time of the year. I guess I didn't enter this contest because of all the words but you've done a great job. Congratulations.
May Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:40 AM
I love the rain lullaby...Congrats on your win Andrea
Arnone Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Number 1 in my opinion. Beautifully written; beautifully rhymed. Congrats!
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Steele Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Very nice, Andrea, my friend. It's never too cold outside for children. Congrats on your well deserved placement.
Scars Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Andrea, love this one, my fave in the contest :) Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your wonderful win! Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your high placement on this short list Andrea. I am thrilled to have been included. Especially because I thought Victor's poem was so wonderful and his poem didn't make the list. I feel guilty that mine did.Cheers, Connie ; ) 7
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 3:17 PM
superb transition of autumn into winter Andrea congrats on placing hugs
Haight Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Lovely imagery of the transition of Autumn into Winter, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
Hay Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Lovely, well done Andrea on your placement, warm regards, Laura.
Arnone Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 3:21 PM
I'm getting tired of complementing your poems. You're just too good. :-)
Daniel Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Great new rhyme scheme:) And lovely write too..
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Its always sad when a season ends, but each change brings new joys with it... This is a lovely write, Andrea, and a joy to read... Good luck in Shadow's contest!
Hagy Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Great made up rhyme scheme! Absolute beautiful arrangement:)
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:47 AM
I am really enjoying the vivid imagery reading these seasonal poems Andrea :-) good luck in the contest - I've still got mine to finish:-) hugs jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:05 AM
A very poetic Autumn's breeze, well done (gl) x brilliant x
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:52 AM
Another great entry Andrea! Mine is a bit like yours but I haven't posted it yet. I am thrilled to be reading these autumn poems, as you know my favorite time of year. Congrats on the past few contests you have placed high in. I just don't have enough time to get back to evey one. Cheers, Connie ; )
Marie Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:37 PM
A wonderful poem, rich in vibrant colours of the season and with the great word.. 'merriment':-) I really enjoyed reading this..though I'm glad it is still summer here..lol My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
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