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Dear Summer’s done and early. As autumn breeze is coming, its breath of coolness brushes on the cheek. Our friend, the sun, is hiding, and rain outside is strumming a lullaby that leaves us feeling bleak. Though charming be fall season, the dark is sooner crawling. Jack Frost arrives to help the days grow cold. And then one crystal morning, the snow flakes will be falling, and vanished be all trace of days of gold. The autumn breeze turns into a blizzard we’ll be hating. Too frigid is the air for us to take. But kids will brave the weather, don mittens, and go skating with merriment upon the frozen lake. Written Aug. 26, 2016 for the contest of Shadow Hamilton: As Autumn's Breeze (made up rhyme scheme: abcdbc)

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Date: 9/18/2016 11:04:00 PM
My great lover of the Summer writes so descriptively of Autumn.
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:16:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win:) Great to read your lovely poem once again:)
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Date: 9/5/2016 11:54:00 AM
Lovely write Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 9/5/2016 4:37:00 AM
Great tribute to Autumn! Well done. Sunita :)
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Date: 9/4/2016 11:24:00 PM
I won't enjoy the summer ending nearly as much as I enjoyed this poem! Liked the ending a lot
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Date: 9/4/2016 1:40:00 PM
This is my best time of the year. I guess I didn't enter this contest because of all the words but you've done a great job. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/4/2016 8:40:00 AM
I love the rain lullaby...Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 9/4/2016 7:01:00 AM
Number 1 in my opinion. Beautifully written; beautifully rhymed. Congrats!
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Date: 9/3/2016 6:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:58:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea, my friend. It's never too cold outside for children. Congrats on your well deserved placement.
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:06:00 PM
Andrea, love this one, my fave in the contest :) Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/3/2016 4:50:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your wonderful win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/3/2016 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement on this short list Andrea. I am thrilled to have been included. Especially because I thought Victor's poem was so wonderful and his poem didn't make the list. I feel guilty that mine did.Cheers, Connie ; ) 7
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:17:00 PM
superb transition of autumn into winter Andrea congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 9/3/2016 2:56:00 PM
Lovely imagery of the transition of Autumn into Winter, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/3/2016 2:24:00 PM
Lovely, well done Andrea on your placement, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 9/2/2016 3:21:00 PM
I'm getting tired of complementing your poems. You're just too good. :-)
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Date: 8/28/2016 9:25:00 AM
Great new rhyme scheme:) And lovely write too..
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Date: 8/27/2016 8:35:00 PM
Its always sad when a season ends, but each change brings new joys with it... This is a lovely write, Andrea, and a joy to read... Good luck in Shadow's contest!
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Date: 8/27/2016 3:04:00 PM
Great made up rhyme scheme! Absolute beautiful arrangement:)
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Date: 8/27/2016 7:47:00 AM
I am really enjoying the vivid imagery reading these seasonal poems Andrea :-) good luck in the contest - I've still got mine to finish:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2016 5:05:00 AM
A very poetic Autumn's breeze, well done (gl) x brilliant x
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:52:00 AM
Another great entry Andrea! Mine is a bit like yours but I haven't posted it yet. I am thrilled to be reading these autumn poems, as you know my favorite time of year. Congrats on the past few contests you have placed high in. I just don't have enough time to get back to evey one. Cheers, Connie ; )
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Date: 8/26/2016 11:37:00 PM
A wonderful poem, rich in vibrant colours of the season and with the great word.. 'merriment':-) I really enjoyed reading this..though I'm glad it is still summer here..lol My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
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