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As Autumn's Breeze


As autumn's breeze prepares for fall's return,
tho still some summer warmth may overflow, 
the shortening of days signals the turn
to think about that season's golden glow.

October stirs her brilliant autumn blend
of colored leaves that fall and drift away.
Her cold, crisp air embraces to befriend,
and we're aware that fall is here to stay.

November days deliver winter's prize,
and soon, when we awake on colder days,
we know that fall is sending last goodbyes
as snowy days ahead prepare displays.

December comes with heavy winter skies;
full winter now to bloom as days proceed,
with snow-filled days, a time that soon implies
we turn our minds to wintertime full speed.

Jack Frost will visit with his flakes of snow,
perhaps a blizzard, crystals on the trees;
ice skating on the frozen pond will show
full winter now is born from autumn's breeze.


August 23, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/6/2016 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on a well written piece:) Great imagery:)
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Date: 9/5/2016 11:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win. love phyl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phyllis, for your nice visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/4/2016 1:37:00 PM
I love fall and this poem is making me excited about its coming. Lovely write. Congratulations and hugubac.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, for your lovely comment and congrats. Fall is my favorite! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 8:57:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra. What a lovely description of fall.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you again, Agnes. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 5:49:00 PM
Great poem, Sandra. Definitely nailed autumn to winter theme. Congrats on your well deserved placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Randy, for your nice visit and encouraging comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 5:04:00 PM
Sweet Sandra, lovely poem :) Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 4:49:00 PM
Its wonderful to see this on the winner's list Sandra many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you again, Jan, for your wonderful support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 3:51:00 PM
Brilliant, the way you ended your poem with the beginning words Sandra, which I am sure Shadow took notice of too. This is beautifully written capturing the the glory of the seasons. Congratulations on your deserving third place win! : ) 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thank you again Connie, for your very supportive visits and uplifting comments, ratings, etc. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 3:45:00 PM
Sandra, great write and description congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. I appreciate your nice visit and supportive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 3:11:00 PM
great imagery Sandra love it congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow. Great contest and I am honored with my placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2016 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your 3rd place Sandra, warm regards, Laura.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/30/2016 7:07:00 AM
I adore this write.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/5/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Augastus! Sandra
Date: 8/24/2016 9:16:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful in form as well as content.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, James. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2016 10:58:00 AM
This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Funom, to read my poem and leave such an uplifting and supportive comment! Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 11:46:00 PM
Excellent poem as always, Sandra! Enjoyed this pleasant verse :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for stopping by to read my poem and for your kind comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 1:30:00 PM
Great meter Sandra!Great write
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, James! Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 11:00:00 AM
Mrs Sandra, your imagery is spectacular. I know where you live, you get some really heavy snows. I just wish she hadn't had this contest so early. The thought of winter is soooo depressing. Lovely write as always. Your poems are such a treat for me.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2016 9:57:00 PM
Hi, Daniel. Thank you for your lovely uplifting comments. Yes, like you, I don't want to think about autumn yet...summer seemed too short this year! I appreciate your wonderful support. Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 9:04:00 AM
A beautiful breathtaking write, well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/23/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Casarah, for your lovely, supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 8:03:00 AM
wonderful imagery Sandra you have painted such wonderful pictures in my mind. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/23/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind comments and support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/23/2016 6:19:00 AM
Beautiful scene it put me in there x I'm freezing now lol x great poem x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/23/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy...those days will be here before we know it! I appreciate your kind comments. Hugs, Sandra
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