As Autumn's Breeze

As Autumn’s breeze caresses the forest
there is a mellow sadness to her movement,
for fallen leaves beneath my feet 
crumble to flakes of brown, the tears of trees.

Past midnight 
in morning’s quietest hours,
just before the lids flicker from dawn's pale eyes, 
the dew stiffens to icy crystals,
heavy enough to imitate a first thin snow;
tender blooms crisp, then wilt, before the warming sun.

Jack Frost, skating past the pumpkin harvest,
blows upon his bony fingers,
blizzard breath a rising cloud about his frigid face,
eyes arched in gelid glee;
he can return to his old haunts and habits,
chasing little creatures into burrows and hollows. 
His glacial crackle coats the pond, 
a skim of ice like frozen laughter from a poor joke
and winter is born anew.

Copyright, August 21, 2016
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/5/2016 11:51:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:46:00 PM
Nicely written, Faye. Congrats on your placement. Well deserved.
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Date: 9/3/2016 5:02:00 PM
Faye, congrats on your placement with this amazing poem :)-luloo
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Date: 9/3/2016 4:48:00 PM
what wonderful personification Faye:-) I can see why Shadow loved this so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:46:00 PM
Faye, I love how you capture the feelings we have of the season like: mellow sadness, tears of trees, dawn's pale eyes. This is simply stunning and so deserving of your high second placement! Congratulations Faye. I loved your entry! : ) 7
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:43:00 PM
this is a wonderful poem, Faye, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:09:00 PM
so lovely and capturing the brief perfectly congrats on 2nd place Faye hugs
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Date: 9/3/2016 2:50:00 PM
So much wonderful imagery in your Autumn into Winter poem, Faye. Congratulations on your fine 2nd place podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/3/2016 2:17:00 PM
This demonstrates the change from Autumn to Winter so beautifully, well done on your 2nd place in the contest Faye, warm regards, Laura. #7
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:58:00 AM
This is a really nice entry s Faye. The tears of trees what a great line! Best of luck in the contest. Aloha Connie ; ) 7
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:23:00 PM
I really did enjoy reading your poem, Faye...Most invigorating - Just like your freezing Jack Frost! A truly lovely poem. My best regards! :) john P.s A worthy seven.
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