As An Adolescent

I'm not invincible, I zoned out and I began over thinking,
Unlike a dilated pupil shrinking, I was untamed between blinking
Thinking dark thoughts, trying to build a fence but my chain wasn't linking,
So I found a pen and some paper and I went straight to the inking

13 years old and I had already tasted of the manic depression,
Ready to session, and drown with the Leviathan now I'm stressing,
Forget the lesson, I raised myself with nothing but a question,
How to survive by myself, so I dropped being a kid and I left it

I picked up a pen before I learned multiplication math,
So realize that these are more than emotions when I start to rap
This is dedication, pens turn to swords when they feel my wrath,
The knight in shining armor, with a sinister laugh

They say I'm, schizophrenic because I hold the horizon still
Or maybe because I took metaphors in the form of a pill
But whatever he reason, I still hover over them with skill
So get ready to climb a mountain, and watch me walk over hills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 9:17 PM
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Hicks Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 12:56 AM
I tend to over think as well. It's both a blessing and a curse of the writer... ideas, emotions, concepts... they come straight out of the clear blue sky and we just can't concentrate until they are visible in front of us... in the form of concrete words. It's better than "under thinking" though... living life without rhyme or reason... it just seems unhealthy to me *shrugs*...
Kyriacou Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 1:31 PM
great poem I really enjoyed it
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:28 AM
- Very good rhyme and flow in your well-written poem Aaron. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Guttery Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Thank you. Please read and comment on more of my stuff, I'm 13 years old and have been writing for a while.
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