As Above, So Below

Live life zealously, it’s an absolute end,
There’s no afterlife and no heaven,
Beyond death, who cares where I’m send,
If it’s hell for me, let it be so my haven!

Ha, I envy them the most who dwell
where ignorance and indifference reign,
They desire no heaven, they fear no hell--
Abode of eternal bliss, pit of endless pain.

Strange yet are the prospects of life;
Does destiny foretells our fate
Or we shape it by our toil and strife?
Alas, no one can firmly state.

The bittersweet fruits of our labor
Here and now in time we must bear,
Of this I am more certain than ever--
A pumpkin seed yields not a pear.

There is no soul’s zenith or nadir,
Death is a fathomless pit, a dead-end--
No heavenly bliss, no hell’s fear,
No one has seen around its bend.



*(Thoth – was an important God/King of the ancient Egyptians who reigned for more than 3000 years. According to legend, he was buried in the great Pyramid of Giza, and when his body was uncovered he was found to be holding an emerald tablet that contained an inscription beginning – “As Above, So Below”)
~08/13/15 - This poem expresses my beliefs, my faith, my values better than any other poem. ~...Eternity contest by Laura Leiser

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/5/2015 12:34:00 PM
Abdul, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2015 10:48:00 AM
Great poetry here Abdul! Congrats on a very deserved win!
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Date: 8/15/2015 9:21:00 AM
If Lazarus had not died a second time he might dispute your claim. When you meet Jesus one day He will share with you much of what is around the bend for lots has happened in the 2015 years since his resurrection. I like that your poem has caused me to ponder this most important of questions.
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Date: 8/17/2015 12:31:00 PM
Each to his own, Richard. Everyone is entitled to his own opinion or tastes. I respects yours...
Date: 8/13/2015 3:34:00 PM
compelling read signifying the importance of one's higher spirit...very well scribed from your golden pen.. huggs
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Date: 8/14/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thanks nette, appreciate your comments.
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