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As a Star

Away, away where you are From where you stay as far As glamorous as distant as a star Way, way from down here I stare up at you, thinking you’re near I try to touch you, I stretch my hand I try in vain, then I realize That you’re far away from where I stand Your greatness made you look near to my eyes When I look up at you, I remember my vileness Then dare no more question why From you far and away am I? It’s not your fault not to notice nor see For you’re so great, something as trifle as me As I can’t reach up to you, Nor have you down to me I devise a new way for a love this far A Love as glamorous as distant as a star The only way possible for such love Is staring from far, staring shall be enough 9/2/2015

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Date: 9/13/2015 10:02:00 PM
Mohamed, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Adel ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:51:00 AM
Mohamed captivating. Loved your write.
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Date: 9/11/2015 3:00:00 PM
I agree! formidable!
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 9/23/2015 12:00:00 AM
yes a little
Date: 9/4/2015 3:42:00 PM
ahhhhhhh so breathtaking xoxoxoxox
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 9/4/2015 10:18:00 PM
Thank you,Aurore, so much for stopping by and very happy you liked it

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