Artwork Of Love -

I painted your heart today
anatomically correct and expectation abstract,
on canvas skin of stretched soul, taut extreme,
mixed media of memory, mania,
love fire and ire,
mixed disciplines of desire, devotion, 
death and divinity,

Primed with a thick coating 
of blood cream passion,
I used my thumb nails to outline 
It's pump of pride,
I began with a pallette of poetry,
Midnight Blue, Angel White,
and Crimson Ink Sweat,
shaping muscle walls with palms 
sliding through wet ache
brining together youth and wisdom
in hot pink,
I lay your veins enroute to the truth
of our pulse,
they glow violet in vast want
of virtue uncriticized,
purple oxygen and new born orange 
unite into fresh flame 
dancing on a breath of forever,
I bite a star into existence 
and it shimmers into a simmer 
of heated spit,

I have brushed your heart
into love incognito,
fine hazel sable tip tickling contours 
that expand consciousness 
into renewed innocence,
I can hear your laughter on the edge
of my pallette knife,
sighs that speak of heartbeat ecstacy,
and moans that mention the end of Time, 

I trace our names
with my barbarous tongue
into the blood flow of our destiny,
heart dripping dreams, 
spilling secrets into Future's wilderness,
using my sorrow sharpened teeth
and hands of tender iron,
I rip this heart work in half savagely,
and it bleeds unto the feet
of my need for You,
I frame the parts 
within gilded tears of tragedy,
to reimind me of how love suffers,
a torn canvas makes two paintings,
that a heart in love cannot be two -


J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 28, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Its a fave for me ~ and this prompt was suggested by my dearest friend Laurentine G. I am sure she will be proud of what you delivered too for her prompt! Thank you for bringing this prompt to life! And I want to print out and frame "a torn canvas makes two paintings, that a heart in love cannot be two -" I want to be in love now! Haha! Well! Blame you! The Guru! Congratulations on your first place win 🏆 Pleasure reading and feeling this Sending you light always 🌹 💎🌊🩵
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August 28, 2026 at 9:42 AM
I thank You, Ink Empress, and Laurentine for electrifying my Quill! I will take responsibility for hungering your open heart...J.A.B.
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August 28, 2026 at 5:41 AM
The skillful execution of evocative emotions throughout made me go, “Wow!” I think this is one of the best poems you’ve ever written too! But I say that every time! So you might think I’m just being nice, but it’s true, dear Justin! Your poetry is not meant for just PoetrySoup; it belongs to the universe, and to books. If anyone truly reads you, they will notice the profound nature of ur poems and be in awe too! Well ~ for now, I’ll end these comments by saying: never, ever stop sharing your art
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August 28, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Your affection for my poetry is priceless, and instills a confidence in me that is like polished steel beautiful Poetess, thank You!...J.A.B.
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August 28, 2026 at 5:37 AM
I understand the depth of emotion you’ve expressed here, dear Justin. It shows such honest, raw emotion of love, and how love will always win and can never truly be divided into two hearts, no matter what, because they beat in sync, in total balance. 🥺 I could praise this masterpiece for hours! It is one of those poems that deserves to be studied, analyzed, and explored from so many different angles ~not just reduced to a couple of comments that barely show that I understood, felt, and appreciated every layer of this incredible composition.
Bordner Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 9:25 AM
It feels good to know that the love moral of this poem touches your vibrant heart great Poetess. I love how you feel my work...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 5:34 AM
"I used my thumb nails to outline It's pump of pride" say what? 😳 😱 "I bite a star into existence and it shimmers into a simmer of heated spit," Wow! I want to bite a star now! How did I never ever come up with a line like that! And how you named the colors! Thats just stellar! I am blown away! And I can easily say you do use poetic techniques like alliterations, metaphors, oxymorons so fearlessly, in such sheer finesse! I love your mention of barbarous tongue! Iv never seen anyone use that word like what even?!!! I am impressed!
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August 28, 2026 at 9:19 AM
To give words full life is the quintessence of poetry Poetess. As with love, words should not be limited. Every word has a full spectrum of expression especially in conjunction with other words and feelings...J.A.B.
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August 28, 2026 at 5:30 AM
How do I even comment on this, dear Justin? ~ I read this with my co-judge, and we were both so impressed! This could easily be one of my favorites for this particular prompt, and overall too, from everything written for my contest! You have such a unique and imaginative mind! And it’s so refreshing to read because it’s simply extraordinary. There are so many lines that made me pause, think, and wonder how your mind works! I love your opening lines ~ they’re so catchy, and then I notice the cadence, the rhythm, the flow…
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August 28, 2026 at 8:03 AM
To paint your heart would be to paint a wonder Poetess. I'm thoroughly thrilled to be your Winner!
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