Articulating Wind

adverse winds chime wild
tides current ebbs, breathes its curse~
ill-tempered young child
exaltation moving force 
manifesting chronic course


6/1/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 3:58 AM
It is a fascinating read, Eve. I am diving back in because I feel I may have missed something and I do not want to.
Warrior Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:43 AM
May your wind blow kisses toward you...lovely verse Eve...^WW^
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:28 PM
This is fun to read, Eve. Is the child a metaphor for the wind?
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Yes! the wind being an Ill-tempered child .. Thank you for getting it .. Hugs dear friend
Proxenos Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 12:57 PM
As long as it is an occasional tantrum and not a ruined child, for the sake of all! Lovely Eve, Hugs, Jennifer.
Poetry Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Basic forces acting at their sites, human living these movements in time, daily impressions of life... good poetry dear Eve, salute alkas
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June 2, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Oh, well i hope the child learns patience...
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