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artic somersaults

artic somersaults 11-30-23 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ artic somersaults arctic colors bluster gossamer rainbow ripples ~ northern lights fanfare north winds of daybreak electric neon highlights ~ polar bears snoring pink and green streaks flash watermelon auroras ~ iceberg skyscrapers auroras fox trot light in staccato steps ~ high stepping brilliance tundra skies blush frozen lights do somersaults ~ polar breaths glow

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/20/2024 11:00:00 AM

Hello Sam. Your entry is timely as we are experiencing artic elements as we speak. Climates everywhere have changed going through cold spells. Where I sit it is 17 degrees with it feeling like 9 and tomorrow the negative digits. Your execution of the haiku suite is marvelous executed wonderfully including voice tone and imagery with a perfect title to which you did not stray. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/4/2023 1:24:00 PM

Sam, your haiku set is very stunning. You've written five amazing gems, and you've articulated them successfully. I adore your selection of words and how you've incorporated them to create magical imagery.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/3/2023 4:41:00 PM

These are so breath taking, Sam, my favorite one is the fourth stanza, but also like 'iceberg skyscrapers' and 'polar breaths glow' - you have got the beauty of the great white north in your verses~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/3/2023 12:30:00 PM

Stringing these brilliant haiku's together or taken singularly ,both are the intense artistic work of Sam Kauffman - a fave my friend. Wonderful sights you depict in each line. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paige Hind

Date: 12/1/2023 8:50:00 PM

Very beautiful. I bet they are quite a sight to see.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2023 7:35:00 PM

I enjoyed all these polar haiku. Beautiful images

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 12:23:00 PM

Five brilliant haiku and you have expressed them so well.. I love your word choices and how you have put them together to create such magical imagery...

Ink Empress

Date: 11/30/2023 8:37:00 PM

Ah this is the second northern lights poem im reading today. Gosh how i wish i can see northern lights, its definitely in my bucket list , and i absolutely love how descriptive this poem is. Every line shows me magical skylines of fleeting and swirling rainbow hued northern lights.i love especially “ gossamer rainbow ripples” “electric neon highlights” “ watermelon auroras” and last lines too! Profound! And artistic is the fitting title for this definitely! Pleasure always reading you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2023 6:41:00 PM

Colorful/wonderful Haiku write. I enjoyed this one very much. Have a blessed day.................

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2023 5:44:00 PM

This is great. One day I hope to view the Northern Lights.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/30/2023 4:41:00 PM

beautiful haikus artistically created. I love each one of them separately as well as together. The title was also perfect. Have to fave this one! have a splendid evening, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 11/30/2023 2:23:00 PM

Beautiful haikus. You should have included an awesome photo. I've never seen one in person. You?