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Creeks and leaves run along the border Mayhap I shall see his face once more I begin to see bizarre sights with eyes wide open Single lights and colors rotating and evolving Flashing in and out of focus before my sleepless eyes Then the bees come out of the wall, giant bees I blink away the bees but then I walk toward our bed the window blinds seem to be open and light is streaming in the window. Branches are waving at me and I remember there is no tree at our window. I get scared, more than ever before; the bees come at me again, gieant bees. Why is this happening to me? Am I dying, having a stroke? Did the fevers fry my brain? The scenes keep flashing and demon red eyes appear and start to consume my family but Jesus pushes the demon down and saves me and my family. The morning breaks and I am glad...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/16/2010 1:05:00 PM
I have read Freud and Jung have to say, but it does not matter ... a dream will mess you up, unless you can feel your spiritual dimension. One love
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Date: 9/14/2010 6:02:00 AM
great poem but if you want a messed up dream read my dementia poem
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Date: 9/14/2010 3:13:00 AM
Doris what a spellbinding write, great title as well ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/13/2010 10:29:00 PM
This is a scary dream. Was it for one of the dream contests? Very good, Doris. I liked it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:28:00 PM
Wow! What an incredible, frightening nightmare. For me the scariest part was the giant bees. Thank goodness this was only a dream!! Spellbinding, Doris. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2010 3:16:00 PM
deep write my fellow poet...didn't wat to make you sad with my poem....Love Michael
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Date: 9/13/2010 5:24:00 AM
Interesting happening...What meds did they give you at the hospital? Have a great day Mom.
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Date: 9/12/2010 10:09:00 PM
Awesome write Doris.. those last two lines peak volumes luv... and so much truth too.. enjoyed the descriptive sequences.. u go girl...and preach that message...
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:32:00 PM
So you show a little of the dark side lurking inside your creative pen. Needless to say I am a fan of the dark writes, enjoyed the ending I always enjoy seeing the morning come myself.
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:29:00 PM
O' Doris, this one is deep and a bit griping to read. The imagination moves with the wind and fear. Glad Jesus see's all, and saves the faith of your family. Enjoyed,.((p.s.)) about my crazy haiku LOL.) yes I wrote them when me and my other had a little splat of our own. But, it is better now.. Later,..p.d.
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