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Arrow Kiss

You are my soul's hinterland Huntress methodical in seduction beautiful in bashful entrapment, capturing this man's mania for erotic offering leading me into open fields of forbidden fantasy, Disrobe my desire, denude my fire that spires hot for you, you are my naked rose the tempt in my nose, study me into your curious and craving eyes steady my focus for inescapable caress, take notes of my heart make love to my every part, You are my love Muse the woman I choose the pulse I use a breath and skin I savor to bemuse, no other woman shall shade and confuse our loving views, this face is yours my tongue adores your shores my Quill explores all your doors, grab me needily where the throb for your grip is thickest, spread petals silken pinkest lay wide your pleasure purest - J.A.B.

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Meg Anderson

Date: 11/20/2014 12:02:00 PM

wonderful imagery. You kept me wanting to read more. I loved it!

Justin Bordner
Date: 11/20/2014 12:19:00 PM

There is a visual rhythm of raw romance coursing through this poem...two goals meet to create one success. I have much more for you Megan...J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/1/2014 10:12:00 AM

Beautiful, sensuous. Everyline drips with seductive honey. Ambrosia to melt on lips. Breathless.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/1/2014 1:02:00 PM

The ambrosia of a captured adoration, the sigh of seized lust, restless beauty Jay...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/1/2014 1:58:00 AM

definitely a perfect example of romanticism.. :D i love each line you sure can make the reader's heartbeat throb lil faster.. :) the rhyme adds to a harmonious dance in your words.. :D "disrobe my desire, denube my fire.. :D" this i like best from all.. :D

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/1/2014 1:19:00 PM

Yes Olive, each creature has a seductive power over the other, feeding eachother tender life. Throb like thunder wet and warm. J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2014 8:13:00 PM

Loved your story of the German Shepherd. Sorry I can't look for a poem of yours to read tonight. My time is very limited today. Next time for sure!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:57:00 PM

Just read the feelings I put into you, that will be poetry in motion Andrea...J.A.B.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2014 5:13:00 PM

This time it's seduction with rhyme, Justin. Somewhat different to what I've been used to, but still expressive and captivating. Lovely and striking phrases throughout. Romanticism at its best. // paul

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:54:00 PM

Romance hunting for hot and healing heart Paul. I just write the way I need to, to honor the pulse of our passion my friend. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2014 9:45:00 AM

Justin, I like how you bring justice to your pen, giving us more than words. I enjoy how you enjoy writing for whomever insures your moment. A muse, confused, loving views, --amazing... Always....Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 2:15:00 PM

The justice is in the knowledge of love become one, conjoined passion Linda. My moment, my life, our sublimity my Sphinx. No confusion, only soul fusion. J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/30/2014 8:57:00 AM

My my,I love the sensuality in your verses.They bleed with so much passion.May your effervescent muse never leave your thought!Charma

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:48:00 PM

Charma, my love Muse reddens my blood, resides in my starlit eyes, traverses my skin with a sweet scratch, and puts amazement in my vision, she is forever in me, with me. Your comment means so much to me, thank you for the warm visit Charma...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/30/2014 12:52:00 AM

Justin, I have enjoyed this erotic poem. Such a sensual one... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2014 8:32:00 PM

Sensuality can greatly stimulate creativity Verlena. His devotion commands her sexual aggression. J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2014 3:44:00 PM

very sensuous writing, Justin. Fantastic imagery, especially at the end!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 4:47:00 PM

Sensuous survival, hot rival of hunt she is Andrea...the end is just the begining of deep feeling. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2014 8:29:00 AM

Only one who has known true passion could write a piece like this. Each word brought emotions and memories flooding back to me. Fortunate for me I am still living my passionate days with the woman who is the completion of my soul.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 1:15:00 PM

Completion, to lack nothing that makes your love of God, self and life true , creative and passionate. Completion begins with trust and happiness of self, then sharing that gift with others, having others enrich those qualities that make you strong and sensitive. You and I are both fortunate Richard, creating beauty, strength and faith with the women we love. J.A.B.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2014 6:33:00 AM

she is the very breath that makes us alive; the words, our inner voice so finely embraced and given away to be relished, Justin... your muse enchants; enjoyed the symbolisms... wow!.. huggs

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 1:35:00 PM

She enchants, hunts, sates ravenously on soul and body Nette...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/29/2014 4:58:00 AM

"study me into your curious and craving eyes steady my focus for inescapable caress," Tempting, tempting. Love...heehee. I find also that last line quite interesting. Pure pleasure, or is the pleasure pure? I really enjoy studying your work.. and there's a change of tone in your work as of late. We are ever-changing, but the wisdom of yours remains, your talented prose remains and blooms ever sweeter. I am captivated. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 2:29:00 PM

We captivate eachother Laura because we gravitae towards the same urgent need, passion and love unique to us, undiscovered before and after...yes, although I do not study the various forms of poetry I am diverse, and these recent poems reflect the spirit and form that is instinctive and necessary to justify my inspiration, type and category do not fit me. This style harkens to my poetic roots Laura, sensational visit! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/29/2014 5:01:00 AM

Also, "take notes of my heart make love to my every part," - those are lovely lines.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/29/2014 4:56:00 AM

First of all, I love that first stanza. There's a beautiful humility in it... and I love that line "You are my soul's hinterland Huntress" -such alluring alliteration throughout, of which you are a master- no surprise there, Justin. But this piece is just huge... I love it! Favorited times a million. (:

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 2:10:00 PM

A very astute observation Laura my deep minded Poetess. A must invite the hunt, follow the scent of perfect seduction...the huntress brave snd eager on a trail unknown. Both entice, both risk. Huge game rewards best. There is a Huntress in you dear Laura...thanks a million. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/29/2014 12:52:00 AM

I'm in my office, Justin. I'm just about ready to go and teach a grammar class, but oh....oh oh oh...what a way to get excited about language!!! I'm so glad I read this now. This glow will follow me all day. Your writing is magical. My favorite lines? "This face is yours, my tongue adores your shores, my Quill explores all your doors"....Oh, but the whole thing sings and sighs. I'm enamored...but this arrow found its way home! ;)

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/29/2014 2:31:00 AM

Mmmm.....your reaction is the action I adore. The arrow found the right heart! Glow Eileen, be incandescent with passionate pursuit for all you crave...I'm throbing proud by your earnest embrace of this poem's romantic rush. A man happily captured and Huntress satisfied. Thank you Eileen...J.A.B.