Arriving

When I close my eyes I hear the sound of your voice floating in the 
air like dandelion fur, catching the breeze and dancing upward.

I remember the day when we camped in the rain and wrapped 
ourselves in blankets to keep warm, hearing the acorn size 
drops pelting the tent and feeling the rain vibrations explore 
our coupled bodies.

How could I have known then what I know now …. the ancient 
wisdom that you have carried with you since the beginning of time.

    You speak to me …
    Your words rise up in my soul 
    filling my being. I feel you gently 
    cupping my heart in your hands, 
    caressing it tenderly. Lifting your
    arms above your head I feel the 
    warmth of the sunlight on my 
    heart. With eyes closed I bask in 
    the moment.

I am transported to flight as a white hawk
stretching my arms out into my new wings and alighting 
on the warm current that lifts me higher.

I am surrounded ……
It is quiet as I glide. Looking downward 
I dip one wing and then another. I let 
myself be enveloped, conscious of the wind 
on my feathers. I am free. Free to fly. Free
to take in all that surrounds me, all that is above me, 
below me, the scents, the sounds, the silence, the 
memories of past, and the vision of the future. 
I am one with you.

Below winding rivers and streams make S shapes 
and figure 8’s, dancing, curving and rolling 
with winking glitter on their surfaces. 
Dry red rocks dot their shores and a heat ….
A heat rushes by.

Onward, upward past towering pines reaching to 
the sky whose tips call me with their green beauty. 
They call. They sing. I hear their ancient voices, as 
their seeds fall silently on the ground.

Leaning into a turn I dip one wing and 
see water before me falling in the distance.
I am being called… beckoned onward. 
There are answers ahead.

The mist clings to my feathers and 
moisture coats me as I fly closer. The 
water is my soul, my heart, my life. 
Whiteness and sound thunder around 
me and yet a peace resides within. 
I am home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ricci Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Good Morning Susan. It was an honor turning to your page and entry this morning. This entry is poetry in the truest fashion in its entirety starting with your title to which you never strayed. You have executed all poetic elements including the emotive factor. Be very proud of your entry and work for entries such as this is why we read. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings (smile)
Eslinger Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Hi, Susan. Classic elegance. Unforgettable Fav for me…wrapping with silk into my treasures box…..
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Hmm I think I have read and commented to all your poetry. Even way down here. So are you in CA right now?
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 7:16 PM
Susan the beauty and feelings of flight and emotion you have created in all your readers. I love your unique style and imagery you create. Enjoyed reading, thank you for sharing. God bless you...
Lawrence Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Michael, I am thrilled with your visit and kind words. I am in gratitude for your and your participation. Thank you my friend. Sending Blessings to you, Susan :)
Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 9:39 PM
Dearest Susan, my time-travel companion and poetry sister, you had me at “floating in the air like dandelion fur” and I knew I was in for an exquisite experience. The wings of the white hawk spread the clouds apart and you soar beyond in transcendence.. so beautiful is your poetic expression, so elevating is your imagery, so elating is your elegant mind and inspiring soul. Thank you, my sweet friend, for a wonderful flight and for sharing the lovely gift of your radiant heart. Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. ~Susan
Lawrence Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Dearest Susan ...You are such a gift in my life. Thank you thank you for the gift of your heart, and mind and soul. You are a true inspiration to me on so many levels. A time-travel companion, poetry sister and amazingly deep and illuminating spirit whom I cherish greatly. I am thrilled we could take this flight together. I look forward to many more ! In love and gratitude to you and your beautiful energy. Love and blessings and big hugs, Susan :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Your "Arriving" is an amazing story/write." I wish you would write more. "I am home," is a great ending to this great write. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away................
Lawrence Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Dear Paula, Your visit brings a smile to my face. Thank you for your lovely comments. Life has been so very busy and I am missing writing, however I will be at it again soon. Looking forward to more of your poems ! Hugs, Susan :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Aahh!! Through the eyes of an eagle. I enjoyed the adventure in flight. Sara
Lawrence Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Thank you dear Sara ! Happy you could fly with me ! Blessings, Susan :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 11:00 AM
wow, you really excel with imagery. Glad I found this one . I came upon it having to look for a poem Of yours I have not read yet, and this one was posted on my Sept. 5 birthday!! A fave for me too.
Lawrence Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Andrea , I am so grateful for your presence ! September 5th ! Honored by the fav ! I love to soar with your poems ! Always a pleasure. Happy Day , week and month to you ! Susan :)
Walimbe Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Great imagery, very nicely done! Have a great day:)
Lawrence Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Hi Komal ! Happy for your visit . Thank you for your lovely comment. All the best , Susan :)
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Susan! Excellent imagery and very good use of personification. Those who seek will eventually find answers and personal satisfaction. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
Lawrence Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Dear Paul , Thank you for your lovely comments and thank you for taking this journey with me . Grateful to have your presence! Hugs , Susan :)
Lindley Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 4:45 AM
A definite gem my friend. Imagery, depth and magnificent verses that are this old poet. A true pleasure to read such a fine creation. A favorite to. God bless.
Lawrence Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Dear Robert, Honored to have you visit. Thank you so very much for your humbling comments and fav. I am so happy you had pleasure reading my poem. Blessings to you, Susan :)
Gregory Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:16 PM
This shared expression is held dear. Vivid imagery. Nicely done
Lawrence Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Gregory ! All the best, Susan :)
Horsman Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:18 PM
At one with nature, a poetic journey, such imagery is so absorbing.
Lawrence Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Thank you dear Harry ! Hugs, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Excellent personification. I like how you express yourself.
Lawrence Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:55 PM
Thank you dear Rick...Looking forward to reading more of your words! Susan :)
Macfarlane Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 4:37 AM
This write soars! Beautiful. Hugs
Lawrence Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Cecilia :) Thank you once again ! Big hugs to you ! Susan :)
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:28 PM
exceptional imagery i felt i was on a journey with you and feel at peace reading your amazing lines:-) hugs jan xx
Lawrence Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Dear Jan..... In gratitude for your words. Susan :)
Seeker Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 12:48 AM
Amazing and beautiful!
Lawrence Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Unseeking Seeker, Thank you so very much. I am very much enjoying reading your poems. All best wishes, Susan
Bangalee Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 1:06 AM
excellent poem and thoughts - shared; I enjoyed
Lawrence Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Mahtab, Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem . I look forward to reading yours as well . All best wishes. Susan
Michael Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Well done Susan...You captured a glimpse of the unseen...in the seen..
Lawrence Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Arturo, I love your words... thank you
Ermine Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Hi Susan. Welcome Soupwards. Dig the vibe of your eagle, nature, camping, poem. You have some nifty adjectives, left of centre, I especially relish that! Definitely a dreamlike quality here. A warmth too, clear to sense with loved one depicted here. Beaut poem.
Lawrence Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Sigrid. I am happy it moved you . Glad to meet you and experience a community here . I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Cheers
Leffanta Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
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