Arrested Moment

The cottage gate now stands ajar
Unbolted by wind and rain
And lonely pink roses growing apart
Reach to touch as in sweet refrain

Crisp silence rules both day and night
Uneasiness settles as my heart slowly sinks
For there's not a creature within sight
Seems, gone forever is the missing link

Although the grass grows lush and green
No man’s feet have beaten a path           
No bushy tail squirrels are to be seen
Nor the discarded acorns left after a spat

The seasons flow throughout the years
And the mystery deepens still
I dare not speak to all my fears
Time has arrested this moment at will
~*~

7/30/'13
For:  "Glimpses of Epiphany" Contest
By:  Annalise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/1/2014 9:00:00 AM
Just had to read another one!! A magnificent one for sure. Bravo!
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Date: 12/22/2013 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful! You are a great writer Annalise! Merry Christmas, Chuck
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:23:00 AM
Well done another perfect entry into the chosen contest, good luck, lovely rhyming, imagery beautiful,
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:50:00 AM
The rhyming schematics was perfect.The imagery gorgeous.I'm glad that I read your poem today...you're a talent.
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:44:00 AM
gorgeous writing, Annalise. I am glad to see it placed high. Congrats to you.
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Date: 8/3/2013 9:32:00 PM
love it :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/3/2013 9:05:00 PM
Annalise, congratulations... thank you for sharing this small 'GLIMPSES OF EPIPHANY" love...Linda
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Date: 8/3/2013 5:38:00 AM
congrats on win lovely poem
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Date: 8/2/2013 11:44:00 PM
this is so spontaneous and mesmerizing, anne... cheers to you for a top win in my contest.. do check my blog!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:35:00 PM
So beautiful, Congratulations.
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congrats Annalise .....Seren
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:20:00 PM
congrats on a great win Annalise
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Date: 8/2/2013 3:47:00 PM
Very beautiful....congratulations
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Date: 8/2/2013 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win with this stunning write, Annalise. Good going, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:38:00 PM
I almost sense a novel's opening chapter....as if something crafted by Daphne du Maurier, ....the mysterious quality is wonderful. Love this !
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Date: 8/2/2013 12:55:00 AM
love this beautiful and thoughtful write, my friend. I hope you got my email and that it's all been resolved now - scary business xx
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:34:00 AM
Stunning Annalise, what a beauty this is. Wishing you all the best for the contest. Love and hugs Wilma
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Date: 7/31/2013 10:27:00 PM
This had me HOOKED! Very, very thought-provoking lines.
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Date: 7/31/2013 6:52:00 PM
wonderful write Annalise ....best wishes
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Date: 7/31/2013 5:22:00 PM
I think we have all experienced this feeling....there are things we will never know.
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Date: 7/31/2013 4:00:00 PM
Thank goodness for those moments. Very serene.. Well done
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Date: 7/31/2013 2:58:00 PM
Very nice Annalise... A bit of sadness, but very nice. :o)
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