Notes About The Poem

“and the walls bore witness to all that withered
the mind lists like a house in winter.

- Poet

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Arrears

the floorboards offer only joist          only the give    the soft jawed stud in the hall
plaster molts white flecks                               like the chicken did last winter
the tv spits a grey electric grit
a static stuck rattling the cul de sac                     the deadbolt evening click

i have swept the dead from the wires       the cold clot they leave in the pipes

the notice said final in red                              it promised a merciful eviction
in a neighborhood of taped up windows
the crabgrass a green fire                              where the dog used to squat    wait

inside    the mind      a leaden bell           a pendulum already swinging
the weight of crown molding and sweat
a siyn nap pops like a fuse when the heart stops

just the thermostat clicking off

the house already a frozen meat locker of blue bellies
as the soul snags on the splintered jamb           by the side door
while the neighbors count                              the moving boxes

i kept thinking about the fridge light                    how long it could burn
over the fatback sweating                into a cold yellow brine
the stars rock salt                         in a split lip
the factory     a pulled socket          wired to nothing        bleeding soot
porch light      a clotted throat                         of toasted wings

the smoke alarm battery dead
all that evisceration funnels us          back to the kitchen
we sit in the kitchen                         thumbing the unpaid slips
my fingers gelid          sticking to the paper
the fridge drones on borrowed power
just caught                   in the clock slow gears          a germ in the cogs
the sink drips

the soul stays          low in the wiring
behind the lath
holding on
until the breaker snaps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Beaufort Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 3:51 PM
Daniel, you may replace Poe in literature as being able to create this type of eeriness. I don't know how you do it, but it's remarkable!! We hope this scene is not repeated very often and hope that everyone can afford to live. Take care!!!
Anaya Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 1:43 PM
A journey into the forsaken souls & the forgotten places lived, walls murmur ghostly, in dimensions of those inflicted. Millions of Americans, especially people of color, are facing those same, painful decisions as a record # struggle with unaffordable rent increases, a crisis fueled by rising prices from inflation, a shortage of affordable housing. Thank you, Daniel, for sharing this awareness. Xx
Hind Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 6:21 PM
Worthy of many reads, Daniel. If I am not careful, this will depress me, but not so bad...worth the read. Wow. What images, a raw look into your mind... nothing is nothing, or...I don't know. It's beautiful, in my favs
Godwin Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 3:01 PM
What words have I that are worthy with no potential decreasing taint of the emotion your painted that seeped into me? Dark hits on dark parts of a human heart whose personal earth has lost all its green in exchange for drab, sad and too bad. I have searched for clues myself in so many houses I once lived in that this line is staying with me, 'the soul stays low in the wiring behind the lath,' An impressive write, Daniel, plus more. CayCay
Bayles Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Daniel, you capture so well the emptiness and pain that many people face. The feeling is so cold, so desolate. I lie the line, "a syn nap pops like a fuse when the heart stops." And the heart in this poem bears such a great sense of loss.
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Dear Daniel, your words paint bleakness not only of a house in disrepair but of a the bleakness of the house of a soul. Your images are precise and as sharp as icicles! And you carry the metaphor throughout the poem beautifully and skillfully. I use the same technique in my one woman drama about the woman with the hemorrhage comparing her to her house that is falling down around her. "Look at this house. There's nothing left of it. Look at these hands they were strong once with hope." Sending you warm winter blessings, dear friend, especially if you are in the path of this monster storm. Stay safe!
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 11:07 AM
To me it sounds like a sad goodbye to an old house in which one can no longer reside. Almost a personification of the house but not exactly! Great atmosphere
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 10:46 AM
A whole lot of angst. Sounds like grief. The cold house…all the imagery. Good one,
May Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 9:10 AM
A gripping verse of survival when the power goes, Well penned, Blessings
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 7:46 AM
I can't imagine how hard it must be on some families living in poverty. In an area where it is so cold it would be even harder to exist. Thanks for sharing this descriptive and emotive work with us. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Billions are born, and billions die. Such is life. A pendulum. On this earth, nothing endures....but in the next......A deep poem with original construction.
Cunningham Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:21 PM
Sadly nothing lasts forever, everything decays over time sadly even us. Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Daniel. Tom
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