Around the Corner

I know it's there
A ghostly vision
Waiting to jump out at me
Bones stripped bare with precision

This is the ghost of life past
My soul stripped bare
For all to see
Ready to jump out at me

My earthly sins revealed
The White lies I told
The love I can't conceal
To reveal, alas I am not that bold

Yes it waits, for me to despair
It waits, to remind me, 
The past I can't repair
I wait for the dawn to rescue me

Dawn arrives the ghostly vision departs
Waving a stripped finger
Reminding me to put things right
I nod my head, it no longer lingers.

I can now turn the corner of life
To rectify my wrongs
To smile and maybe love anew
To live not just exist, once more sing songs

penned 13/10/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/22/2014 11:01:00 PM
simply beautiful Seren now are you an early bird? or a night owl like me lol. Really enjoyed this exquisite pen hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/23/2014 1:34:00 AM
Hello Shadow I am a bit of both.glad u enjoyed my poem... Thanks for commenting...Seren
Date: 10/12/2014 8:39:00 PM
VERY good one, Seren. It was a bit like Dickens' Christmas Carol!! If you get my drift!! Loved this.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
thanks for commenting Andrea....Seren
Date: 10/12/2014 8:20:00 PM
A spectacular write, a creative take on the topic. I really like this piece Seren. Amazing!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Maurice wasn't sure about it myself lol...Seren
Date: 10/12/2014 8:20:00 PM
Don't be afraid of the past...be truthful and live life to the fullest.....excellent Seren....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:34:00 AM
that's true Tim ...Seren
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