Around My Domicile

Used to be able to walk for miles Now I get out of breath, this is not a smile Breathing's a strain A strain on my brain So no more walking unless it's around my domicile<>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 10:22 AM
Keep chugging along, never give up. Good day Jack
Ellison Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Choo-choo!!! Still chugging along! Good day Sir Thomas!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Oh, I hope that's an exaggeration for art's sake. Extra hugs your way my dear friend, xomo <3
Ellison Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Well kinda... not as active but the mind is still clicking along!!! OOOEEE! XOXOX
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