Around Me

I sit in the park NO one here IM the last 
my  mind  so tired Yet moving so fast
 I can feel YOU the REAL you before you passed
 SAVE the moment make it last 
Your HEALTHY body in  wonderful HEALTHY motion
 IM filled with such deep emotion
Close my eyes and I can see Your spirit around me
Your the butterfly in the tall greer tree
I can see your smile It goes on for miles
 FOR a brief moment Not living  in denial
 This moment is  ours I SMELL you amongst  blooming flowers 
TRUE like this holds that kind of power
 there you are in the big blue sky
 AS beautiful as YOU are in my eyes
 I reach out NEED to feel your touch 
Before ashes to ashes and dust to dust
 A time &  place Before You died
 A place where only the river cries
 You are the wind that BLOWS Sea to Sea
Your sweet spirit lives inside me
 You are the comfort of a crystal blue Sea 
You are the warmth of a summers  breeze
LOOK at the sun WARM &  bright
Its  Your laughter  lights The stars  every night 
Your soul dancing So close how can it be?
Your gentle calmness Softly  speaks  to ME 
NOW I KNOW Youll never be to far OUT of sight
 AS the SUN sets IN that moment  I feel YOU
And I know I will Somehow be alright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/20/2016 9:39:00 AM
Diana, such a sad write and I love the ending..well written and very emotive with great flow :)-luloo
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Date: 4/20/2016 4:44:00 PM
THANK U VERY MUCH ITS FOR MY BELOVED MOM WHO I JUST LOST
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