Around In Circles

On shards of glass I would gladly rest, To ease my Mind, but I think it best To sleep upon a wave's cool crest- Lying gently on my Lovers' breast By impulsive choices I am caught, I surrendered, though valiantly fought! And all this searching hasn't brought Me any closer to the Truth I've sought

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/8/2013 7:29:00 PM

Chan This is a different and intriguing piece. Makes the reader think about answers to this and questions in their lives Nice job Thanks for the awesome and flattering comments on my Heartfelt poem. hugs and love Sweet pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:42:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review, Sweet Pea! :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/29/2013 10:35:00 AM

An interesting rhyme structure, which, nevertheless, isn't tedious or contrived, as is usually the case. I liked it very much. Mark

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/29/2013 11:07:00 AM

Thanks for the read and review, Mark; I appreciate the compliments and for stopping by :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/26/2013 5:42:00 PM

This is one of your best, adding to my favorites, also deserves a 7!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 9:18:00 PM

crap that should have said "NOT particularly proud" lol

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 9:17:00 PM

Wow; thanks, Richard. I'm particularly proud of this piece, but am happy to know someone appreciates it. Thanks, my friend :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2013 12:10:00 PM

Ahh!! Great rhythm and flow to this one..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 12:56:00 PM

Thanks as always, Sara. Enjoyed reading your new pieces. Thanks for dropping by and for the review :)