Russell Sivey Poet Free verse

Aromatic Flowers

Within the blue sky floats petals
Those from the most aromatic flowers
Which I see colorfully before me
A beautiful scene of serenity and hope
A pleasant feeling befalls me here
Like the first kiss from that special person
Whom you have waited for all your life
This field exudes this very emotion
A peaceful glow from the Earth
Through these wonderful proud flowers
Their purpose could have just been found
In my eyes, they are the epitome
Of everything this universe loves

Russell Sivey

Entered into Poet Destroyer A 's "free verse poem. (15 max lines)" contest

3/12/2013

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Bukang Liwayway March 20, 2013 at 10:47 AM Aromatically and wonderfully written poem friend Russell...Congratulations on your win in PD's contest. Cheers!! :) Love,Maria

Donna Jones March 20, 2013 at 7:50 AM Congratulations Russell ...great job...Donna.

Connie Gildersleeve March 20, 2013 at 4:48 AM A wonderful write Russell. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards March 19, 2013 at 8:50 AM so beautiful, Russell! Congratulations on this wonderful poem!!

Hidden Sister March 18, 2013 at 8:57 PM Russell this is so pretty!

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 6:43 PM Russell Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD

Isaiah Zerbst March 14, 2013 at 9:41 AM Very nice poem. Beautiful descriptions. Certainly very alive and colourful.

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2013 at 6:03 PM Very descriptive but yet maybe metaphoric work..Not sure..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I only see Robins here in the early spring and it us usually all males then again sometimes in the fall just before winter...I always thought that they were migratory and just came through like the geese but a close aqaintance sent me an email where one had nested on her porch in a hanging flower pot.I would think as large as they are .Sara Sara Kendrick March 12, 2013 at 6:04 PM they would be messy if they came to one's porch or close to the house to nest and eat from feeders..Thanks again for your visits..Sara

Debra Squyres March 12, 2013 at 4:26 PM Wow !! This is beautiful !! Love how you finished it... wonderful way to look at nature's beauty !! Inhale !!!

Donna Jones March 12, 2013 at 4:21 PM Just beautiful Russell...so peaceful...good luck in the contest.