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With my father being terminally ill as a carer I am allowed to have 4 free aromatherapy massages at the local Hospice - it is total relaxation for an hour - the best 'me' time I have ever experienced in my life

Aromatherapy Massage

Soothing music playing Essential oils Gently applied to my skin So relaxing Total escape from reality Jan Allison 7th January 2015 Contest: Somewhere- Nette Onclaud Checked Using How Many Syllables 6,4,7,4,9 – total 30
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Lamoureux Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 5:37 PM
I try to go for a massage a few times a month. Fortunately My wife works in health care and has a tremendous benifits package.
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 5:43 PM
I feel totally rejuvenated after this treatment Richard - the amazing thing is it is free - as hospice realise the stress the carer's are under and it really is the best hour of 'me' time ever:-) Hugs jan xxx
Schumacker Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 4:45 AM
Hi Jan, Nice poem. Nice structure. Good for you that you can find some quality time. Good luck in the contest. Reality is way over rated. Have a great and pleasant day. Earl
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:14 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Earl - If i get an hour like this to totally escape from my worries that s absolutely a golden moment for me:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Jan, you describe something I dearly love and am in need of! Hmmm, it looks like a new contest is afoot, huh? I wish I had time to even look at all the new contests. Good luck with this one, sweetie.
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 3:05 PM
Yes its for a contest - have seen some lovely entries:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 11:19 AM
I've never had a massage. So many people have told me to go for one, so some day one day I will. Nice one Jan, James :) xx
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 11:46 AM
I can't recommend it highly enough James - I get total escape from the complexities in my life - and feel a million dollars when i have it done and as it is done in Hopsice they know the situation with my dad they are able to let me talk through my emotions too - total therapy all round:-) hugs jan x
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 5:59 AM
A beautiful escape from reality. Well put.
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much Scott:-) Hugs jan xx
Cooper Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:09 PM
I can understand completely. I started having regular facials about a year ago i drift off to sleep every time, and feel ten years younger afterwards. Exactly as your write. Which is very good Love Shane xxx
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Sounds wonderful Shane it is so so relaxing and the best 'me' time I have ever had in my life:-) Hugs jan x
Yvonne Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:34 PM
About my last comment...I talk like that but deep down inside...I mean it!
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Our hospice also do gift vouchers for the massages it is about £35 a session but they dont publicise this enough - they people who do the treatments understand the stress involved in a persons life especially if they are in the position of being a carer - seriously I can highly recommend it my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:32 PM
I like the picture you posted...do you know if they're hiring?
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Look in the phone book you may be lucky LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Love it, happy they are taking care of you! This write is perfectly composed I hope it does well for you.
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:29 PM
It is the best experience in the world Armand i come out feeling a million dollars so relaxed and ready to face the challenges ahead:-) I would recommend it to anyone in a similar situation:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:08 PM
mmm sounds great!Enjoy it!
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Its amazing Cas! Hugs jan xx
Meade Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:01 PM
I get a deep tissue massage -- ooooh so good!! Relaxation is the best way to handle stress -- keep breathing deeply my friend. 7
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Isn't it the most amazing experience David! I feel so relaxed I go to sleep when I have it done:-) Hugs Jan
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:36 PM
I've never had one Jan but I crave one now....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Total 'me' time Tim it is an amazing experience - total time dedicated to me - I feel a million dollars when i come out. Our hospice is the most wonderful place we are so luck to have one on the Island:-)
Kiser Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:10 PM
A soothing pen. So sorry about your father's illness...you do need those massages.
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Thanks ML:-) it is the most incredible experience I feel 6 feet tall and so calm when I have had it done:-) Hugs Jan x
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