Arms Like An Octopus

In spite of his charm and stunning good looks Been accused by the fuzz of being a crook Stole the hearts of young girlies With his humour quite earthy He had more arms than an ruddy octopus © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Very interesting one. Has he joined the circus? : ) Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 7:47 AM
LOL! Good idea, Miss Laura!!! Love, Santa Jack xxx
Eastman Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Sounds like The Quacken. He's quilty as can be... The banshee doesn't come close. No siree'... The girls did flock at his decree... But he's now behind bars as there was too much whoopie...
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:09 AM
NEVER NEVER too much whoopie!!! LOL xxx
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Hands got caught in the cookie jar....jail time for him won't be far....ladies no more...break-in rocks his chore...for his loving years will be behind bars
Ellison Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Are you going for the crown??? You, my friend are a serious contender!!! LOL
Tor Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Jack John is so good. You guy should team up. John had me chuckling. lol.
Ellison Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 12:33 PM
We could go on tour... whatcha think??? LOL
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