Armistice

He lowers his hat as she wipes her tears,
when falls a thoughtful hush, as battles cease,
we hear their silent thoughts across the years.

He comes home battered and torn by his fears
in nightmarish dreams that will never decrease
he lowers his hat as she wipes her tears.

Weary soldiers greeted by grateful cheers,
from the pits of war, a brief release
we hear their silent thoughts across the years.

As they battled on those hellish frontiers,
and life was lost at a bullet's caprice,
he lowers his hat as she wipes her tears.

From private soldiers up to brigadiers,
our sovereignty became their golden fleece
we hear their silent thoughts across the years

The words of remembrance ring in our ears
in heartfelt hopes and prayers for blesséd peace
he lowers his hat as she wipes her tears,
we hear their silent thoughts across the years
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Walters Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 7:14 PM
A beautiful Villanelle, very moving. Congratulations on a well deserved win! hugs, Kris
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July 22, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem and having it featured this week. Rhonda Hero
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July 20, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in the soup contest.
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July 20, 2010 at 12:34 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Charles
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July 19, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup Contest Jem. Love, Carol
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July 19, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jem. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Beautiful..
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July 18, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Jem, a villanelle is a beatiful poetry form and you did it great justice here. Your repeating lines are so moving. A big congratulations to you in the contest. LUv,Andrea
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July 18, 2010 at 4:29 PM
A very moving and heartfelt Villanelle, dear Jem. Congratulations! on your win. Love, Lainie
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July 18, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Very moving and heartfelt Villanelle, dear Jem. Congratulations! on your win. Love, Lainie
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July 18, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations Jem.Excellent write and portrayal....Well deserved! Love Jeralynn
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July 18, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PS 2010 Feb Contest, Jem! Peace, love, Audrey
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July 18, 2010 at 6:41 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG win in the contest! Peace always, John
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July 18, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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July 18, 2010 at 12:11 AM
Jem, Your Villanelle is exqusite! Congratulations on having it featured. These are not easy to write. You have done and excellent job on it.
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June 3, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through the first round Jem. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 12, 2010 at 6:43 PM
and we the conquers of the world cannot rest for the world waits to conquer. jhl
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May 12, 2010 at 2:57 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Jem. Love, Carol
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May 11, 2010 at 6:41 PM
A creative and heartfelt reminder of how much the military and their families sacrifice. Good use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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May 11, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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May 9, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Jem >> James
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November 28, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Hi Jem, I love this form of poetry...especially for repeating events such as war. This one is well written. Keep writing. Smiles, Dane Ann
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November 24, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Jem. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
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November 23, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Jem, this is a great reminder that many loved ones make the ultimate sacrifice, leaving those behind to mourn the "hellish frontiers." Genuinely moving write! Love, Carolyn
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