ARMGAUNT EFTES and RIBAUDRED

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ARMGAUNT EFTES and RIBAUDRED

fub
    poppering
with
  pibble-pabble
&
impetico

 insisture
tanling
the
    tirrit passado
forgetive
   pioned
to 
  a fedarie
pajocked
pash & 
        toged

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Crystol Woods

Date: 2/15/2025 9:09:00 AM

Wow... it must be good cause I can't decipher it lol. I love the way it sounds though! Congratulations on your win! Xo

Ink Empress

Date: 2/14/2025 2:44:00 AM

Dear brian, what a most creative take on this form! I love the way yours sound! With great use of alliterations and when read out louds sounds surely like some different dialect maybe! Very innovative of you! Congratulations on your trophy win! So nice to see you recognised. Sending you light always.

Trina Layne

Date: 2/12/2025 5:48:00 PM

Is it Klingon? I've never heard of this style before. I wish you congratulations!