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Poem written in response to a poetry class assignment with an image of pennies in a gutter…”your poem should include a subtle insight or piece of wisdom.” 

ARITHMETIC OF LUCK

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A penny face-up in the gutter— Abraham’s copper gaze half-lidded with rain. I pocket him like a secret, like the first digit in an equation no one taught me to how to solve. The laundromat coughs up dimes~ silver cataracts rolled under dryers, buried beneath lint and lost socks. I tally them in my palm, each one a tiny moon pulled from the tide of neglect. My grandmother saved buttons in a jar, swore they were pirate treasure. I collect coins instead~ nickels in parking lots, quarters wedged between bus seats, their edges bitten with teeth marks. When the year ends, I spill them all onto the kitchen table~ a metal harvest, a jingling autopsy. Enough for a coffee, a lottery ticket, or the weight of knowing that fortune isn’t a mountain but the slow accumulation of what everyone else steps over.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful, Sara. Added to my FAVE's.
Wolf Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 8:07 PM
Love it. As the son of parents who lived through the Depression, I saved every found penny, nickel, dime, etc.... And in the 90's, when savings accts. still paid 5% interest compounded daily, I paid for my oldest sons' Bar-Mitzvah that way... Granted, it wasn't exactly lavish, but we all had a good time, and he was happy ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 12:04 PM
Well done, Gershon ~
DiMino Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Very thoughtful -- great imagery. You get an A!
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