Arising

on the edges of my mind you rise blushed in thoughts like eastern skies your breath whispers in sighs against flesh like this wind suddenly january's air seems less bitter

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2020 7:54:00 PM

Ah, the poetic whispers of a warming trend coming your way (not soon enough!) Two thumbs way up for this one, Sandra! Blessings, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 8:04:00 PM

lol...it was in the 60's here today...i wanted to wash my car but it's supposed to rain overnight so for now i just did all the windows and vacuumed it and detailed the inside because i wanted to enjoy the warmth... hugs :)

Running Wolves

Date: 1/11/2020 4:14:00 PM

such a beautiful write....

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:12:00 PM

Thank you :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2020 1:26:00 PM

This is stunningly beautiful Sandra! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much my lovely friend... hugs XoXo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2020 4:28:00 PM

Sandra, I made it a point to visit your work today as I have become fond of your style. And just look at this beauty! I remember being in love in New Jersey winters. If we were embracing, the temperature outside didn't matter. I can relate to your last stanza. Keep up the excellent writing! Hugs, Carolyn

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 8:55:00 PM

wow thank you so much Carolyn...i am not far from jersey, same weather and skies you remember...i frequent the beaches there...temperature bothers me more now but i try to think warm thoughts to ignore the depths of its chill... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/10/2020 3:53:00 PM

This is hopeful and inspiring like the eastern skies--lovely write!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 8:52:00 PM

Thank you Vijay... have a great weekend my friend :) hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 1/10/2020 3:37:00 PM

ahhhhh, so lovely sweet Sandy. We are so similar...beautiful poem lovely lady, be blessed and have a great night x:-)-luloo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 8:52:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend.... i think we are similar too in styles... hugs :) enjoy your weekend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/10/2020 1:31:00 PM

This one warmed my heart a bit, and helped me see January as less of an enemy, more of an opportunity.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 1:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren glad I could help ... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/10/2020 11:22:00 AM

It does feel good when just the thought of someone warms our heart and soul and brings a bit of spring to the cold winter months. Sigh ~ another incredible piece of writing.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...thoughts of someone special can warm us from the inside out...perhaps only temporarily but any warmth in the brutal winter months is welcomed... :) hugs